Post by blackvault100 on Jun 28, 2015 22:30:04 GMT -6
thank you mh originally christy ballaton ii was gonna be the final christy ballaton installment ever but i got room for one more. than i'll put those characters on that one jeffery batt was in the first one as was tim falay even that character too also on the final chapter so here it is the final chapter of christy ballaton ii 
qiu has been killed off but she did took chin with her before she got killed also a a hallen 5 tease on this chapter which hints the next christy ballaton story will lead
The Cast
Christy Ballaton Rancho
Jerry Rancho
Chief Chung Wuu
Amanda Ballaton (Secondary Antagonist)
Stewart Telbet
Lang Cho (Main Antagonist)
Guest Starring Sandra Williyamms
Chapter 13 : Christy Vs Lang
Christy : you recon the radar will keep track of his chopper?
Sandra : don't worry it will keep track
Christy : good....
Sandra : and this chopper is closing in on his postion
Christy : once we get close angle it so i can get a good shot at him
Sandra : you got it
police officers shoot at lang's chopper lang shoots back at them killing 3 chinese police officers
Trilad Chopper Pilot : *chinese accent* we got a bogey on our tail
Lang : *chinese accent* binoculars
lang gets the binoculars and looks in at them and see's christy and sandra
Lang : *chinese accent* IT'S BALLATON
Sandra : Okay he's trying to attack you won't be able to use the sniper on time
Christy : then I'll get him manually..
christy uses a claw latcher onto lang's chopper and slides to it and kicking lang in the chest
christy and lang get pushed out onto a building rooftop which wasn't fatal since the chopper wasn't that high
lang tries to use karate moves on christy but christy counters it with her own moves and punches lang and head bonks him and punches him rapidly in anger because he killed qiu
Christy : a court room trial is outta the question for you.. You killed children and women you are sick you killed qiu... a good friend and team mate of mine
christy snaps lang's wrist
Lang : ahhhhhck
christy punches lang and kicks him
lang nearly goes unconcious
Christy : but you're through this time your lawyers won't even save your ass
suddenly a sniper powered rifle is pointed at the trilad chopper pilots head from a distance then the sniper rifle is shot then the bullet hits the trilad chopper pilot in the head killing him then the chopper spuns outta control christy sees it then she rolls outta the way then as lang turns he screams but it was too late the propeller of the chopper depicates lang's head killing him instantly
the crashed chopper falls off the building
Christy : hmmm.
christy looks at the direction where the sniper came from
it's revealed to be amanda that killed the trilad chopper pilot
Amanda : christy. looks like I do things your way.
christy's mobile phone rings
Christy : hey jerry. yeah that's right.... lang's finished how are the other suziki special ops doing? good... yeah but we got to tribute to qiu first before we depart back to the US... okay I'll meet you there then I'll call sandra to pick me up
Later on
Hong Kong China Airport
christy and other suziki special op's are paying a tribute to qiu
Christy : qiu established the suziki special ops a task force to stop lang and the trilad's qiu was killed in the process so I succeeded in her footsteps but now after lang has been killed, and the hong kong trilad's are finished. the suziki special op's are now hearby disbanded as qiu planned for them to be after stopping them so now we did...
christy steps off the microphone and she walks towards qiu's mother and hugs her
Christy : sorry for your loss
qiu's mother bows her head at christy
Sandra : That was very thoughtful
Christy : thank you. you guys have been great
Sandra : yeah but you know you got a family back in the US. you go back to your family. and as for me I'm no longer a US civilian ever since i moved to hong kong take care of yourself
Christy : sure will
christy and sandra shake hands the other suizki special ops bows at christy and christy bows back at them
amanda is seen since she gave herself up jerry has her in handcuffs
Christy : question to you.
Amanda : yes?
Christy : why did you turns on the trilad's?
Amanda : simple... when i found out they slaughter children that was way outta my league.
Christy : You still got a good heart. you may not see that but I do
Amanda : yeah yeah
Chung : *chinese accent* take care christy nice working with you,
Christy : thank you sir
Chung : *chinese accent* i know you love our city but you got to go back to the US you have family that miss you.
Christy : That's right sir so about the hide outs that the suizki special op's maintained? What about them?
Chung : *chinese accent* They will be auctioned off at some rich person's convention
Christy : I guess take care chief
Chung : *chinese accent* you too
christy and jerry stewart and amanda walks into the national guard private plane suddenly chief chung his swat team his police officers including the was members of the suizki special op's and sandra all salute christy as the national guard plane takes off
National Guard Private Plane
christy is writing in her journal again
Christy Narratting : so lang has been killed the entire hong kong trilad's has been crippled. my mission is complete too i got my sister but she gave herself up she even helped back there, I know she killed that trilad pilot but it wasn't for her own goal my sister killed people like lang but amanda has never killed children, their is still good in amanda. amanda has kids herself and i know she would want to see them but it's gonna be difficult to work that out but i know I'll get that done qiu is gone. but her memory wasn't because the trilad's are history so now heading back to the USA when i get home I'm gonna get a nice hot bubble bath also the other versions of me, well what we did before was we lured amanda out of the parallel universes. Oh speaking which i still got the device but I know who i can give it to and i trust these siblings completly as i have worked with them before. (siblings that's one of the teases)
Jerry : so christy will you quit the crimes unit?
Christy : Yes....semi that is, their is still one more losey i got to do first. i read some important files in a folder you brought here with you...
Jerry : Hey now that was confendtial
Christy : well you know me.
Jerry : *chuckles* I do
christy and jerry stewart laugh
Stewart : our mission is a success too
Jerry : yep i got my wife back. my beautiful wife
jerry and christy kiss each other
jerry hands christy the folder that said H5 and christy reads it again (this is the tease right here)
the files said assistance required
Coming Soon
Christy Ballaton's Brother James Ballaton Stars is Talbian Sword (the first spin-off to the christy ballaton stories)
Also Coming Soon
An Untitled Christy Ballaton Story that will be split in 2 parts to give the christy ballaton series a good finale.
qiu has been killed off but she did took chin with her before she got killed also a a hallen 5 tease on this chapter which hints the next christy ballaton story will lead
The Cast
Christy Ballaton Rancho
Jerry Rancho
Chief Chung Wuu
Amanda Ballaton (Secondary Antagonist)
Stewart Telbet
Lang Cho (Main Antagonist)
Guest Starring Sandra Williyamms
Chapter 13 : Christy Vs Lang
Christy : you recon the radar will keep track of his chopper?
Sandra : don't worry it will keep track
Christy : good....
Sandra : and this chopper is closing in on his postion
Christy : once we get close angle it so i can get a good shot at him
Sandra : you got it
police officers shoot at lang's chopper lang shoots back at them killing 3 chinese police officers
Trilad Chopper Pilot : *chinese accent* we got a bogey on our tail
Lang : *chinese accent* binoculars
lang gets the binoculars and looks in at them and see's christy and sandra
Lang : *chinese accent* IT'S BALLATON
Sandra : Okay he's trying to attack you won't be able to use the sniper on time
Christy : then I'll get him manually..
christy uses a claw latcher onto lang's chopper and slides to it and kicking lang in the chest
christy and lang get pushed out onto a building rooftop which wasn't fatal since the chopper wasn't that high
lang tries to use karate moves on christy but christy counters it with her own moves and punches lang and head bonks him and punches him rapidly in anger because he killed qiu
Christy : a court room trial is outta the question for you.. You killed children and women you are sick you killed qiu... a good friend and team mate of mine
christy snaps lang's wrist
Lang : ahhhhhck
christy punches lang and kicks him
lang nearly goes unconcious
Christy : but you're through this time your lawyers won't even save your ass
suddenly a sniper powered rifle is pointed at the trilad chopper pilots head from a distance then the sniper rifle is shot then the bullet hits the trilad chopper pilot in the head killing him then the chopper spuns outta control christy sees it then she rolls outta the way then as lang turns he screams but it was too late the propeller of the chopper depicates lang's head killing him instantly
the crashed chopper falls off the building
Christy : hmmm.
christy looks at the direction where the sniper came from
it's revealed to be amanda that killed the trilad chopper pilot
Amanda : christy. looks like I do things your way.
christy's mobile phone rings
Christy : hey jerry. yeah that's right.... lang's finished how are the other suziki special ops doing? good... yeah but we got to tribute to qiu first before we depart back to the US... okay I'll meet you there then I'll call sandra to pick me up
Later on
Hong Kong China Airport
christy and other suziki special op's are paying a tribute to qiu
Christy : qiu established the suziki special ops a task force to stop lang and the trilad's qiu was killed in the process so I succeeded in her footsteps but now after lang has been killed, and the hong kong trilad's are finished. the suziki special op's are now hearby disbanded as qiu planned for them to be after stopping them so now we did...
christy steps off the microphone and she walks towards qiu's mother and hugs her
Christy : sorry for your loss
qiu's mother bows her head at christy
Sandra : That was very thoughtful
Christy : thank you. you guys have been great
Sandra : yeah but you know you got a family back in the US. you go back to your family. and as for me I'm no longer a US civilian ever since i moved to hong kong take care of yourself
Christy : sure will
christy and sandra shake hands the other suizki special ops bows at christy and christy bows back at them
amanda is seen since she gave herself up jerry has her in handcuffs
Christy : question to you.
Amanda : yes?
Christy : why did you turns on the trilad's?
Amanda : simple... when i found out they slaughter children that was way outta my league.
Christy : You still got a good heart. you may not see that but I do
Amanda : yeah yeah
Chung : *chinese accent* take care christy nice working with you,
Christy : thank you sir
Chung : *chinese accent* i know you love our city but you got to go back to the US you have family that miss you.
Christy : That's right sir so about the hide outs that the suizki special op's maintained? What about them?
Chung : *chinese accent* They will be auctioned off at some rich person's convention
Christy : I guess take care chief
Chung : *chinese accent* you too
christy and jerry stewart and amanda walks into the national guard private plane suddenly chief chung his swat team his police officers including the was members of the suizki special op's and sandra all salute christy as the national guard plane takes off
National Guard Private Plane
christy is writing in her journal again
Christy Narratting : so lang has been killed the entire hong kong trilad's has been crippled. my mission is complete too i got my sister but she gave herself up she even helped back there, I know she killed that trilad pilot but it wasn't for her own goal my sister killed people like lang but amanda has never killed children, their is still good in amanda. amanda has kids herself and i know she would want to see them but it's gonna be difficult to work that out but i know I'll get that done qiu is gone. but her memory wasn't because the trilad's are history so now heading back to the USA when i get home I'm gonna get a nice hot bubble bath also the other versions of me, well what we did before was we lured amanda out of the parallel universes. Oh speaking which i still got the device but I know who i can give it to and i trust these siblings completly as i have worked with them before. (siblings that's one of the teases)
Jerry : so christy will you quit the crimes unit?
Christy : Yes....semi that is, their is still one more losey i got to do first. i read some important files in a folder you brought here with you...
Jerry : Hey now that was confendtial
Christy : well you know me.
Jerry : *chuckles* I do
christy and jerry stewart laugh
Stewart : our mission is a success too
Jerry : yep i got my wife back. my beautiful wife
jerry and christy kiss each other
jerry hands christy the folder that said H5 and christy reads it again (this is the tease right here)
the files said assistance required
Coming Soon
Christy Ballaton's Brother James Ballaton Stars is Talbian Sword (the first spin-off to the christy ballaton stories)
Also Coming Soon
An Untitled Christy Ballaton Story that will be split in 2 parts to give the christy ballaton series a good finale.