Venom Fangs

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the 2nd installment of m.a.s.k cinematic universe's phase two and 11th installment total on the m.a.s.k cinematic universe the episode has some flashback stuff before ton patterson collapsed from his gunshot wounds where the injuries were threatening enough to kill him if he didn't get treatment fast he calls his father bradley and his young girlfriend tiffany to tell them their in danger that hardball know's the location of the condo but he could be too late also introducing ashely johnson aka maddam venom the new regular onto the m.a.s.k cinematic universe also she's ton patterson's new girlfriend maddam venom is a more darker gritty vigilante who's been training to kill hardball agents and soldier's and corrupt police officer's for beating her brother into a coma state when they mistaken her brother for a bank robber she is also the daughter of clawfang's the character from valley v the vigilante returns he's her daughter from another marriage and reveals she knows gordon hemrock and she also has connections the sanctuary speaking of clawfangs i said he will return on an later installment of the m.a.s.k cinematic universe well clawfang's makes a cameo on the first episode

then he later returns again in another installment which is the around the corner shortly after venom fang's is completed

now general cade ferrick wanted to kill ton patterson himself by doing expirements on him but apprently the hardball soldiers shot him where it did damage where even if they catch him his gunshot wounds would kill him before arriving at the hardball headquarters

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson

Guest Starring Ritcher Cunningham/Clawfangs

The Sanctuary

ton patterson is seen in a coma

Gordon : How is he?

Female Envolved Human Nurse : the gunshot wound penatrated near his intenstine

Somewhere Near New York City

before ton patterson collapsed from his gunshot wounds

ton patterson is seen holding his waist with blood dripping from him also he's on his mobile phone trying to call his dad bradley

Ton : ughhh dammit voice mail, Dad it's me, ughhh listen you and tiffany need to get outta there you're both are in danger hardball is after you uggh dad i love you

ton patterson gets off his mobile phone

Ton : ugh ughhh.... I got to escape ugghhh.

sirens are heard also choppers are heard

Ton : ugh damn

ton patterson camoflauge's himself into the bushes

Ton : i see what their doing, their standing guard into their attack choppers above to see if i take flight, that makes flying challenging since they can spot me, ughhh Dammit, Judith where are you? ughhhh dad please be okay,

Chopper Pilot 1 : Hardball air unit 98 calling base , were over the area if he tries to fly our machine turrents will stop him faster than his flight since he is wounded, he won't get far if he tries.

Chopper Pilot 2 : let's see if it'll be easy to put flyboy in a bodybag like it was when that slums resident stoled a cake from that bakery shop then he thought him going back to the slums would save his ass from us boy he thought that wrong when we dropped him hahahaha

Chopper Pilot 1 : That felt great they break the law we break them and we don't go easy, the soldier's are on foot with help from the local authorities

corrupt nypd officer's are seen inside the woods with hardball soldiers

Male Corrupt NYPD Officer 1 : where's that son of a bitch at?

Male Corrupt NYPD Officer 2 : we'll get him and he will pay for his kritian elf dna in him

Hardball 98 Soldier 1 : scanners picking up where he was recently,

Hardball 98 Soldier 2 : the more of these kritian sympthizers we kill the more it does society a favor

Dispatcher : air unit choppers are on the way hardball unit 98

Hardball 98 Soldier 1 : That makes it more easier

Hardball 98 Soldier 2 : yes that way we'll trap him from both angles

Hardball Agent on Speaker : this is hardball unit 39 the 2 suspects a man and his young girlfriend that barricaded themselves into their own private condo in marco island florida for a few hours have finally been put into the ground in bodybag's were taking their bodies to the morgue for dissecting dispatcher

Dispatcher : copy that

Hardball 98 Soldier 1 : oooh looks like our fellow affliate's in florida just emerge victoriously,

Hardball 98 Soldier 2 : I'll be sure to give them a shout out on the hardball facebook page.

Ton : ughh damn bastard's

Corrupt NYPD Officer 1 : i say when we find him we gun him down like he was a helpless animal

Corrupt NYPD Officer 2 : He is like a helpless animal without his kritian elf suit hahahahahaha

both of the corrupt nypd officer's start laughing along with the hardball soldiers

Hardball 98 Soldier 1 : good one

Corrupt NYPD Officer 1 : thank you i try my best

Hardball 98 Soldier 1 : even though i think we should just kill him right out here but general ferrick want's to do the job himself , he plans to expirement on the suspect that were looking for but hey a few broken bones won't kill the suspect of course hahaha

ton patterson's vision gets blurry

Ton : not good my wounds they making me feel like I'm about to black out , must push

ton pattersons looks at his gunshot wound

Ton : damn that's alot of blood lost. ugh grayson my little baby he would grow up without a father i can't allow that ugh , i wonder how he's doing, ughh I'm 25 and i never gotten shot at before, ugh

a air unit chopper land's with nypd police officers dressed in miltary like suits start scouting the area so does hardball air unit choppers

Ton : ugh they got me surrounded, damn ugh i need help ugh m.a.s.k has been out of reach ever since hardball was given permission to affiliate into various cities around the US, i don't know where judith is, hardball has cut me off from my girlfriend ashley, i finally met a girl which took awhile to meet another one after me and rachel broke up, rachel is so such a good mother, ugh i know she wouldn't like knowing if grayson would grow up knowing his father was gun down in a helpless way by hardball , ugh damn

ton patterson's eyes begin to get blurry since his gunshot wound's are nearly killing him also his heartbeat begins to beat very weakly then suddenly ton pattersons eyes begin to flash of his childhood through his adult hood then to rachel petrelli to show how much he loves her

ton patterson's eyes goes to the first time he met rachel back in 2007 at the high school he went to

ton patterson's eyes goes to when him and rachel were holding hand's together when they were dating in station square

also ton patterson's eyes goes to rachel smiling at him back when they were dating

ton patterson's eyes goes to when he gave rachel flight tours around station square various times

ton patterson's eyes goes to when he was in tokyo japan during his vacation in 2011 where he first encounter neux the naitirk

ton patterson's eyes goes to his former step mom stephine rosewater patterson cooking

ton patterson's eyes goes to when rachel was smiling at him at while holding hand's with him when they were dating

ton patterson's eyes goes to when rachel gave birth to grayson on runaway elves

and other stuff

Present

The Sanctuary

a different area of the sanctuary reveals envolve humans who reside there and also a young envolve human nurse is seen by ton patterson who is unconcious

ton patterson's new girlfriend ashely johnson a black african american walks up towards the female envolved human nurse

Ashely : How is he

Female Envolved Human Nurse : not good when gordon found him he has already lost conciousness and he lost alot of blood

Ashley : No their must a way

Female Envolved Human Nurse : don't get the wrong idea we can still save him but it'll be a slow process

ashley stares at ton patterson in a coma

Ashley : first my brother now the man i care about.

gordon walks up towards ashely

Gordon : your father is here. he assisted he talks to you outside instead,

Ashley : Okay...

gordon and ashely walks off and they go outside and see clawfang's

Clawfangs : *voice disguiser* hey

Gordon : I'll leave you 2 alone

Ashley : thank you

gordon walks off

Clawfangs : *voice disguiser* I heard about this guy you're with now, I'm sorry

Ashley : they hit him hard he had no chance to defend himself, I'm going after them dad..... I'm gonna make the bastard's pay for what they did to issac and ton patterson,

Clawfangs : i taught you well your acrobat abilities are very powerful

Ashley : of course we closed in on the names of the cop's and hardball soldiers that slugged issac multiplate times

Clawfangs : you can do it

Ashley : that's the idea after all it's personal the chief of police is the first I'll half to scratch off follow by the DA who also played a part in sealing the officer's indenity

Clawfangs : i wouldl ike to see issac's room but your mom would not like that.

Ashely : i know i hardly talk to her i think it'll just be too much for her I only see issac whenever mom isn't there.

Clawfangs : hardball is really ruining peoples live's out there

Ashley : yes they sure are the president is in on it too.

Clawfangs : let me know whenever you get the job done

Ashley : you bet i will

a young female envolved human nurse walks up towards clawfang's and ashley

Young Female Envolved Human Nurse : ton patterson has regain conciousness but barely and he's asked for you.

Clawfangs : go see him ashley I'll head back

Ashley : okay dad be careful

ashley and clawfangs hug each other

Clawfangs : I love you

Ashley : I love you too

later on

ton patterson is seen with his eyes opened ashley holds his hand

Ton : *weak voice* ashley

Ashley : yes baby it's me.... ton what went on where's your kritian elf suit?

Ton : *weak voice* before they shot me, they took the suit i couldn't get it back , suit is the only thing that *coughs*

Ashley : it's the only thing that can save you?

Ton : *weak voice* yes....

Ashley : i can get it back

Ton : *weak voice* not by yourself,

gordon walks in

Gordon : sorry for easedropping but i can possibly get your suit back.

Ton : *weak voice* who are you?

Gordon : gordon hemrock i'm special like you i can teleport, I'm the one who saved you from the hardball and nypd police officer's

Ton : *weak voice* thanks

Gordon : don't mention it, also i know your sister judith, i met her in italy she's light years away now because hardball has blinded her with one of their light sensors so she's recovering

Ton : *weak voice* i see.... her and matthew have already encountered them then, ashley. my father and his girlfriend i need to know if their okay....

Ashley : what is it?

Ton : *weak voice* hardball found them out, they went to marco island to kill them for my father having a half kritian elf daughter i don't know if they got to him or not... my father means alot to me ashley, contact....... ugh

Ashley : take it easy.

Ton : *weak voice* contact my uncle buzz patterson my father's brother, tell him about what went on, tell him to find out the info on my father and tiffany, but look out for my uncle though i need the kritian elf suit back... uncle buzz is on facebook

ton patterson goes unconcious again

Ashley : don't worry ton I'll get the suit back No me and gordon will.

Gordon : ton only passed out but so if he doesn't have the suit his gunshot wounds will kill him

Ashley : yes, he's not doing too well the nurses even said so, but his kritian elf suit is the only thing that can heal his wounds and keep from being killed

a male envolved human walks in

Male Envolved Human : gordon we hacked into the police department's database we found the names of the officers and hardball soldiers who have rouged up ashley's brother issac.

Ashley : good let's do this

ashley and gordon walks out

Washington DC

ark

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Venom Fangs Oct 21, 2015 22:55:33 GMT -6

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Post by blackvault100 on Oct 21, 2015 22:55:33 GMT -6

here's episode 2nd we see ashley johnson kickass as venom fang's by murdering corrupt police officer's and a corrupt DA also includes a flashback also serge and lisa jerrica and viessa are in the fictional pittsburg city called station square

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson

Guest Starring Chief Reed Loeger
DA Todd Bunningster
Officer Stephen Lane
Amie Lane

A local news report

Anchorman : a manhunt is on the way for 3 suspects 2 white males and one black male charge with killing 3 police officers 2 hardball agents and wounding 4 other police officers in the process 2 as they are fugitives police dressed in military uniforms and hardball assistance has blocked all route's witnesses said the suspects were highly trained as he witnessed one of the officer's getting a bullet in his neck

another local news broadcast

Anchorwoman : a manhunt is on the way for a suspect that fatally stabbed 2 hardball agents in the neck which conswiendenly the stabbing is 20 miles from where another manhunt for 3 suspects charged with killing 3 police officers and 2 hardball agents and 4 wounding other 4 police officer's offical's are saying it's unknown if they are connected or not, but calls the recent attacks on police officers and hardball enforcers a white act of terror and terriosm

another local news broadcast

Anchorman 2 : since after the prison break out at hardballs headquarters in washington dc hardball cracksdown with even more aggression against kritian elf sympthizers and are even more trigger happy than what they were before

a fox news broadcast

Male Fox Anchorman : IT IS VERY SICKENING TO LOOK AT THE COMMENTS ON THE INTERNET OF THE USERS RALLYING FOR THE CRIMINALS WHO HAVE KILLED 3 POLICE OFFICERS AND 2 HARDBALL AGENTS , THE KRITIAN ELVES ARE TOO BLAME FOR THIS THEY ARE NOT HEROES THEY ARE ALIEN TERRIOST FROM ANOTHER PLANET,

Female Fox Anchorwoman : Indeed they are,

Anchorman 3 : chief reed loeger still refuses to reveal the name's of the officer's and hardball agents that has beaten issac johnson into submission which lead to him being in a coma vegatable state, DA todd bunningster said the officer's who will remain nameless are good men they have families and children and it's our job to protect them not add to their stress of being a cop harder same applies for the hardball officials

more news broadcasts of manhunts

New York Madhattin

Home of the Chief of Police

the chief of police was on his phone to his wife

Reed : How's your sister doing? Oh that's great, good I'm glad yeah I'm about to head out. i got so much paperwork to do sure thing i love you too bye

sound of a evil female laughter

then suddenly ashely johnson aka maddam venom appears behind chief reed loeger

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* How amusing you love her, issac johnson love's his family but that didn't stop your officers and hardball soldiers from wailing on him

Reed : I don't know who are you? but I don't immidate easily, but you best give yourself up I'm not giving you the names of the officer's of mine they are under my protection

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* hahahahahahahahaha your officer's are like spoiled rich bully kid's who hide behind their daddy for protection against a angry crowd you are like their father , the doctors said issac's condition is not looking good

Reed : i don't see how issac johnson has anything to do with you.

reed tries to slowy open his desk drawer to get his gun out but a cobra was in there instead and the cobra bites his hand

Reed : AHHHH

chief reed falls to the floor strugglig very fast

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* That's right that's right move very fast that way the poison can go through out your system very fast , power and greed and corruption is what got you bitten

Reed : UGH UGGGH You're You're ughhhhh crazy ugggggh you crazy uggghhhh BITCH

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* and before the poison goes to your brain to clear up issac johnson, What does he half to do with me, Simple, HE IS MY BROTHER. and i already know the names of the officers and hardball soldiers you protected and they are next so is the DA

Reed : UGGGGH UGGGGGGHHH yyou don't know what you have started ugggggh,

then suddenly chief reed loeger's body stops struggling since the poison of the cobra's bite killed him

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha pathetic

maddam venom picks up her cobra snake minion and wraps it around her

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* We did it now 18 more to go

DA'S Office

Todd : working late aren't you?

Female Secautary : Yes sir i got to get these files done on the case.

Todd : You're a workaholic hahahahaha

todd walks out and goes to his car and unlocks it with the key then starts the engine up

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* You know when i was a child snakes was the main reptile i was terrfied of but then i learned to master it as i became a young adult now their my minion's and allies. as for you mr DA , i read your history and your history involves protecting corrupt cop's like the one who raped a 22 year old girl then he walked free another involving an officer shooting and killing a hostage and wounding another when the suspect fled the cop's knew the hostage was there and endangered her safety but didn't care then instead of having the face being displined he instead was rewarded best heroic police officer, then the chief of police disgustley said sacarficing the safety of the hostage was worth the risk at catching the suspect

Todd : it was justified the suspect was dangerous and shooting him was too protect anyone else from hurt by the suspect of course one hostage was killed too by the police officer's but it was needable to take out the threat

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* You are sick and twisted

Todd : I don't who you are lady but you sealed your freedom breaking into my car, i know what this is about you're just trying to coax me to giving you the name's of the officer's too bad i won't.

todd tries to reach in the globe cabnet for a pistol but a yellow snake was in there and it bit him

Todd : AHHHHH

todd's body begin's to shake from the reaction to the poison

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* I already know the names of the officer's hun you protect corrupt cop's means you yourself is corrupt , and issac johnson is my brother

todd's eyes to begin to get terrified since he know's the poison has traveled fast through his system then todd's body stops moving since the snake venom killed him

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguser* He went faster than chief loeger

A Police Officer's Home

Stephen : I knew you would like that hot tub baby

Wife : yeah it look's so nice, it's what we always wanted,

Stephen : and we got it big this penthouse

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* how does it feel to steal propery from a family that was struggling to keep from being bankrupted ,

officer stephen lane gets out his gun and looks around

Stephen : WHOS THERE? COME OUT WITH YOUR HAND'S UP NOW

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* I sense you're nervous , officer stephen lane your history involves shooting a suspect over a expired driver's licsense another beating up a pregnant woman another involving shooting a man reaching in his pocket for his driver's licsense despite you requesting to see his driver's licsense another you shot a man running down his stairs to find out what was going on,

Stephen : THIS IS OFFICER STEPHEN LANE REQUESTING BACK UP

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* hahahahahahahahahaha your walkie talkie isn't actived , then their's issac johnson my brother.

maddam venom sneaks up behind officer stephen and taps his shoulder

stephen tries to use his gun as he turns his head toward's maddam venom but maddam venom kicks the gun from his hand maddam venom then slains officer stephen lane in the neck with poisoness snake venom nails killing him

Stephen : accck

later on

officer stephen lane's wife comes out of the shower

stephen lane's body is seen on the bed under cover's

stephen lane's wife is unaware of him being murdered she smiles

Wife : Oh honey don't tell me you went to bed without cuddling with me.

then stephen lane's wife realizes he's been killed

Wife : *screams*

newspaper shows of the police officers that has beaten ashely johnson's brother issac into a vegatable coma have been murdered

Last Year sometime after The Battle In New York

ton patterson and ashley johnson are seen walking towards the pool area of a local hotel she's wearing her black fancy evening dress and brown high heels and a female hat

Ton : Look's no one's around

Ashley : good for us then,

ashley pours wine into their glasses

Ton : well heres us

Ashley : ayeeee

ton patterson

Ton : nice out here at the pool isn't it?

Ashley : I'm glad you had fun

Ton : yeah that was one fancy wacky store.

Ashley : yeah i put that fake mushtache on here and you looked sexy in it,

Ton : you really know your way around those places

Ashley : hun i got friend's who own those shops.

Ton : yep

Ashley : My ex boyfriend he had a mushtace he always refused to shave it, it looked pretty good on him, you know i only had sex a few times,

Ton : Really?

Ashley : yeah that was when i was dating him no big time sex though.

Ton : i hadn't had sex in 3 years

Ashley : awwww from the look on your face you look like you're lonely without it

Ton : It ain't easy now. my ex girlfriend now married if she can manage that so fast i wonder how come i can't?

Ashley : awwwww

later on

ashley and ton patterson are seen taking their clothes off at the same time and they have sex

Present

Pittsburg Station Square

Best Western

serge and lisa are seen inside the motel of a local best western

serge takes off his white detective hat off also he's wearing a white long sleeve dress shirt and tie and black dress pant's also lisa is wearing her white blouse black female shorts she's also barefoot also on her laptop

Serge : I can see why it's station square....

Lisa : Yes the city hall building has a name for that freeway out there on the east side, what was it ummmm speed highway

Serge : city hall building?

Lisa : Sorry hahaha i mean the people that run the building, see they own that freeway, back then the police use to patrol that freeway away from drunken driver's now though they use it to terrioze it's civilian's.... luckily though hardball hasn't added the city as a affliate

Serge : but they do got that protest going on, and we can't get to ton patterson when he's in a hardball affliate area.

Lisa : currently though jerrica and viessa are looking to see info on ton patterson

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Venom Fangs Oct 22, 2015 18:11:07 GMT -6

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Post by blackvault100 on Oct 22, 2015 18:11:07 GMT -6

here's episode 3rd this episode introduces detective skyler wendell a now corrupt police officer who is struggling to not break the code blue of silence and breaking it, also introducing his wife a channel 5 station square news reporter also this episode introduces kritian elf sympthizers nathan damon cravage and the rest of them also part of the lend a kritian a hand station square group

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Topaz Wendell
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford

Station Square

lend a kritian a hand station square protestors are seen in a friendly protest

station square police officer's are seen

Best Western

serge is seen watching the channel 5 news report of the protests

Topaz On TV : members of lend a kritian a hand protestors have gathered in support of the kritian elves, also a member of the group was arrested and beaten for giving a officer the finger at close range, angry members of lend a kritian a hand gathered also outside of the police station to demand his release, also the manhunt for envolved human fugitive ton patterson was interupted while hardball soldiers did wound him but another envolved human came to his aid and knocked out the hardball soldiers and nypd police officers luckily though none were killed, but a hardball spokes person did say that ton pattersons gunshot injuries were very severe

Serge : ton patterson no.

Lisa : I'm curious who came to his aid.

Serge : that sound's like gordon hemrock

Lisa : gordon hemrock?

Serge : he's a teleporter we met him in italy before we got back to our home planet he helped us big time when rescuing those prisoners at the hardball hq

Lisa : well where could he have taken them?

Serge : The sanctuary we don't even know where that is, it's a undisclosed location somewhere out in the wilderness

Lisa : maybe they can help ton patterson

Serge : i hope so, judith wouldn't like this if her brother did not pull through

Zaxby's

jerrica and viessa are seen wearing straw hats while looking at the news

Viessa : you think ton patterson will be okay?

Jerrica : not if they don't get to him on time to treat his injuries.

a male customer walks up towards viessa and jerrica

Male Customer : Hi ladies

Jerrica : What do ya want?

Male Customer : You 2 look lonely.

Viessa : we got company....

Male Customer : yeah where are they?

Jerrica : each other.

Male Customer : would you mind squeezing in for a 3rd?

Viessa : Take a hike pal

Jerrica : Seriously...

Male Customer : okay okay. just trying to be friendly

the male customer walks off

Viessa : how pathetic.

Jerrica : tell me about it

Viessa : serge would mop the floor with him for getting fresh with us

Jerrica : serge isn't that type remember

Viessa : a woman can dream can she?

Jerrica : Hahahahaha

Viessa : Hahahahaha

Jerrica : hehehehe

Best Western Hotel Room

lisa is searching for topaz wendell online on her laptop

Lisa : I found the news reporter on here. look

serge walks up towards lisa

Serge : topaz wendell a channel 5 station square news anchorwoman joined the channel 5 news team 6 years ago formally a G U N agent from the now defunct G U N military group she became a channel 5 news reporter she is married to also a former G U N agent skyler wendell they were married 10 years ago and have 2 children topaz likes to spend her quality time with her children

Lisa : including her husband

Serge : I can't figure out why she would say that about ton patterson if she's been friends with him

Lisa : we got to find out ourselves.

Channel 5 News Building

topaz gets off the air

Topaz : I'll check my fb page.

topaz's camera man is snoozing topaz smiles and nods her head back and fourth

Nolan : Okay girl you got me.

Topaz : come on I'll buy you lunch first I got to check my FB page

topaz gets online to her fb account and notice she has negative feedback of her accusations towards the kritian elves. even threats

topaz stares upsettly

Nolan : assholes....

Topaz : but their anger is understandable

Nolan : understandable they threatened you, all you did was your job.

Topaz : I'm a professional about that stuff

topaz's husband detective skyler wendell walks in

Skyler : Hows my wife?

Chief Cameraman : She's in her office

skyler wendell knocks on the door

Topaz : come in

skyler wendell walks in

Skyler : Hows my beautiful wife?

Topaz : perfect as ever.

Skyler : Hi nolan

Nolan : detective.

Skyler : Hey topaz i got lunch

skyler shows his wife topaz japanese food

Topaz : awww honey you shouldn't have, i was gonna go out for lunch

Skyler : well i bought lunch to you

topaz hugs skyler

Topaz : thanks skyler that's very sweet.

Skyler : You're welcome

skyler and topaz kiss each other

Nolan : I'll leave you 2 alone.

Topaz : thank you

nolan walks off

Skyler : So you were perfect i saw your broadcast.

Topaz : hey thank you... It's nice to have support from my husband.

Skyler : I just got cleared

Topaz : of what?

Skyler : that kritian sympthizer who kept flooding my comments with a picture of himself giving me the finger, I was called to his house as i went to arrest him he took off so I had to shoot him in the back 3 times because he ignored my orders.... then i found out the suspect was a diabetic , his family vow to sue the police department for it, regardless of him being a diabetic or not he had business of harrassing me like that.

Topaz : i agree with you.... a kritian elf symphtizer are misguided people he was a diabetic but he should not get special treatment for it, You did the right thing honey he might've killed an innocent person. I support how you are handling them

Skyler : you are awesome

skylers mobile phone rings

Skyler : Yes? Oh hi chief. what? damn sorry about that, yeah I'm on it. you got it okay bye

Topaz : what is it skyler?

Skyler : the protestors are refusing to leave, so I been called to assist.

Topaz : be careful

Skyler : thank you, and save my food for me.

skyler and topaz hug and kiss each other

Topaz : I'll pick the kid's up from my mom's later

Skyler : Okay

skyler walks out

Nolan : Why didn't you tell him about those comments?

Topaz : I can't he's got enough stress right now, and don't you tell him either.

The Sanctuary

gordon is seen watching the news on tv

Gordon : Good job.

Ashley : Yes but i still got more of them to kill

Gordon : looks like their taking percutations though

Ashley : That won't stop me.

Gordon : I think I'll go with you this time

Ashley : No it's personal

Gordon : none the less I'm aiding you this time.

Ashley : Okay... just leave my actual targets to me and you take care of those by the way have you founded buzz patterson

Gordon : I looked in on that, they said he went outta town.

Ashley : any idea where?

Gordon : No

Ashley : keep looking

Station Square

the station square lend a kritian a hand protestors are seen station square police officers are also seen

Nathan : Look we told you we just want the kritian elves to not be harrassed and for station square not to turn into a hardball affliate city, were a friendly protest. were not violent people

Corey : I won't tell you again you dog's clear out or you will be put in boxes like dog's

Damon : nathan why waste your time trying to explain to these damn wretched pig's they don't care if it's friendly protest or not.

Nathan : but we can reason with them without violence.

Damon : i'm telling you it won't do any good they already manhandled perkin's and arrested him

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I'm back sooner than i thought, while i was out i been working on venom fang's alot, also coming up on the story it's our first look at the cosminians who made their debut on venom fang's first one is a mysterious female alien being who does look human but she is from light years from a star system

first off bernard a new character who is geeky nerd helps out serge lisa viessa and jerrica out so now episode 4th

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Topaz Wendell
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow

Station Square

Damon : these pig's could care less if it's a friendly protest that won't stop them from getting nasty and i won't take a chance knowing they will start shit with us by suprise like they did the other ones.

Nathan : No damon were better than that, we got to think this through.

Corey : So what's it gonna be are you all gonna go home? or do we half to put you down like dogs? your choice.

Swat Officer : They don't seem to be complying

Corey : of course their not, they want us to get nasty

Swat Officer : yep

Milton : Hardball will bring trouble to station square please listen to us, we mean no harm

skyler wendell arrives

Skyler : What's going on?

Swat Officer 2 : the lend a kritian a hand protest group refuses to leave the area

Skyler : tear gas all here?

Corey : Oh look detective you're just on time, these stubborn dog's refuse to obey us. what do ya say we give them broken bones like perkins or we do it this way or both?

Skyler : These people ask you to leave the area please comply or face the consensquenses

Nathan : MR WENDELL, Do ya remember me? you saved me from that police officer that tried to beat me with his baton then you helped my mom when she was being hold captive by stacy decker.

Skyler : Yes i remember but what is your point?

Nathan : Mr wendell you were a hero to me when i heard all about your missions at G U N that was great, i idolized you you were a great person one of the best g u n agent's WHAT HAPPENED WHY DID YOU CHANGE?

Skyler : That has nothing to do with what is on now

Damon : No use skyler the backstabber wendell turned and joined the code blue of silence.

Corey : Oh I'm getting a itchy finger

Skyler : deploy the chemical weapons

Corey : with pleasure

corey shoots out a chemical weapon then damon deflects it with a baseball bat

Damon : HA

corey stares speechslully

Corey : You just dug your own grave cravage

Damon : You ain't stopping us that easily.

Corey : Oh i have your criminal record. i can still use that 2001 DUI against you despite it being 14 years ago

Damon : Bite me

Milton : we don't want hardball here in station square. it's wrong

Best Western

lisa is on her laptop

Lisa : Look at this serge.

Serge : what?

Lisa : Just browsing different hair styles of the opposite sex

Serge : interesting in getting ryan a hair cut?

Lisa : Yeah he's been wanting to have a different hair style

lisa stares at serges hair

Lisa : he look good spiked

Serge : did he say so?

Lisa : He hates to get a regular haircut so he wants something different i think

Serge : Oh

lisa brushes her fingers against serge's hair

Lisa : spike hair

Serge : you think he want's spiked hair?

Lisa : well he said any type of hair, but I know he would dig this my handsome brother has such pretty spike hair

Serge : I know i try haha.

Lisa : you can have alot of wanders with the girls. if you weren't married of course.

Serge : I know i never had any luck with girls before, till i met valarie

Lisa : *yawns* i guess I'll cut the laptop off

lisa cuts the laptop off

Zaxby's

a geek non glasses male walks up towards jerrica and viessa

Male Customer : listen you girls i know you 2 are kritian elves but don't panic I'm on your side.

Jerrica : who are you hun?

Bernard : bernard kilow

Viessa : so how did you find out were kritian elves? I'm curious

Bernard : i saw ya'll check in and saw through the curtain it was little bit opened by the way I'm a big fan of your kind and i think you 2 are the most hottest female kritian elves i ever seen, well judith is cool too but judith she's a beautiful half kritian elf and divine but you both are hot

Jerrica : is that so huh? well viessa

Viessa : yes jerrica?

Jerrica : why don't we take mr kilow outside for a nice friendly chat with these 2 hottest female kritian elves

Viessa : why yes jerrica that's a good idea after you mr kilow

later on

sound of jerrica punching bernard then pressing her high heel against his throat

Bernard : ugh acccck what was that for?

Jerrica : Start talking who are you?

Bernard : accck i already told you acck I'm bernard kilow

Viessa : ooh not your name i mean who you work for

Jerrica : Paparazzi perhaps?

Bernard : acccck no course not I'm just a fan

Jerrica : Fanboy perhaps?

Bernard : accck what did i say to make ya'll so defensive?

Viessa : calling us the most hottest female kritian elves is something we find a very oddly behavior from a stranger

Bernard : acccck i was only being nice...

Jerrica : Look i don't trust you. so i think i need to talk over to viessa what should be done about you?

Viessa : i like to know too what do ya think?

Jerrica : i dunno like maybe we use one of your abilities or i crush his voice box with my foot?

bernard laughs nervously

Viessa : voice box crushing is a perfect stealth combat in my book.

Jerrica : Very sexy too i may add

bernard faints

Viessa : Well what's wrong with him?

later on

Motel Room

Lisa : seriously?

Jerrica : I had to test mr kilow out to see if he could be trusted'

Serge : you tried to crush his voice box with your kritian stealth stand your ground move on a human

Jerrica : Hey that's right i never did it on a human before, it was always ogres.

Lisa : it's stuff like that that gives kritian elves a bad name.

Viessa : hey we weren't really going to hurt him,

Lisa : But he didn't know that.

Serge : My sister is right, what if it had been somebody who had a history of a stroke or someone who is a diabetic.

Jerrica : you got a point there, My apoligies

bernard regains conciousness from fainting

Bernard : my head owww

Lisa : Hey it's okay you're with friends...

Bernard : I see now, but why all that stuff for before from you 2

Jerrica : Sorry hun me and viessa are bounty huntresses and were use of getting rough like that, sorry about that.

Bernard : it's okay

Lisa : I'm lisa that's my brother serge and our 2 friends you already know.

Bernard : Yeah

serge watches the news

Serge : lisa look

Lisa : What is it?

Serge : the cop's are threatning to deploy chemical weapons on the lend a kritian a hand protestors.

Lisa : That's not good

Serge : They won't stand no chance against them they'll be killed.

Lisa : Yeah we got to go stop them.

Serge : Got the disguises?

Lisa : Yes

lisa goes to the closet and pulls out a white female kritian elf hooded cloak also pulls out serge's white male kritian elf hooded cloak

Bernard : i got a van i can drive ya'll over there, to keep from being noticed yet

Serge : That be nice sir thank you.

Bernard : you got it

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here's episode 5th buzz plays PI to try to dig deep into finding what happened to his brother bradley and his young girlfriend tiffany also flashback shows maddam venom murdering corrupt cop's who were trying to kill a female prisoner for murdering the detective's son in self defense who also is her ex boyfriend

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Topaz Wendell
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow

Station Square

Van

Jerrica : Hold on one thing i don't get is if this skyler wendell character was a supporter of us kritian elves then why is he all of a sudden treating us like were threats

Bernard : He was also friend's and ally to ton patterson I'm sure some of you are aquainted with him?

Serge : me and my sister are, but jerrica and viessa haven't met him yet. speaking of which that's one of the reasons why we arrived ton patterson is in trouble.

Bernard : trouble how? Oh no

Serge : one of our kritian elves back on our planet can vibe his location and saw hardball soldiers chasing him,

Bernard : Hardball dammit, they might've either killed him now or have it locked in one of their facilitys. judith would go through length's to find him

Serge : well right now she's not in the condition for now after her previous encounter with hardball in italy.

Bernard : you know despite hardball not affiliated here in station square yet, i saw 2 suspcious military choppers fly towards prison island.

Lisa : prison island? that's where G U N use to be.

Bernard : bingo, but rumor has it skyler wendell has been seen entering one of those choppers so one of the former g u n agent's has been going in and out of prison island with what would appear to possibly be hardball choppers. also skyler wendell has been pressuring the mayor to approve hardball being a afflilate here. but if hardball is operating in station square without being approved. then general cade ferrick is trying to cover up his his illiegal tactics. and skyler is covering their tracks for them, but I'm not just helping for you kritian elves hardball also has my sister.

Jerrica : That's a cliffhanger.

Lisa : sorry to hear that

Serge : who is she?

Bernard : denise she had briain damage before. she was helping me trying to raise money to get a member of the lend a kritian a hand out of jail, but her health got too much for her she had to bow out. now hardball has used that to their advantage and took her. you know,,, I wouldn't be suprise if they are holding her at prison island....but damn we can't do nothing about that now till after we prevent a war on the streets of station square

Lisa : i doubt these protestors will attack the police back.

Bernard : but still it's the fact that these cop's will kill them without any hesitation and regret

Madhattin New York

maddam venom is seen punching a swat officer rapidly then wrapping her legs around his neck snapping his neck killing him

another swat officer tries to shoot maddam venom in the back

Male Swat Officer : YOU'RE GOING TO THE MORGUE

but maddam venom does a backflip and slains the swat officer with her venom claws in the neck

Maddam Veniom : *female voice disguiser* too slow sweetie hahahaha

Male Swat Officer : uggghk

the male swat officer starts to struggle since the poison was working fast which kills him

Gordon : Nicely done...

Maddam Venom : well did you find out where buzz patterson went?

Gordon : He's gone to marco island florida to find out where his brother and his girlfriend is

Maddam Venom : Damn he's putting himself into danger.

Gordon : did you take care of the rest?

Maddam Venom : Yes i killed them all. finally

maddam venom smiles

newspaper said manhunt on the way for unknown cop killer charged with murdering 18 police officers including the chief of police and DA

Marco Island Florida

A Local G U N Shop

a old man in his late 50s walks in

Owner : Yes sir what can i do for you?

Buzz : are you the one i talk to on the phone?

Owner : yes sir

Buzz : Why did you hung up on me?

another customer walks in

Owner : Yes sir i think we got what you are looking for come to the back we have one more in stock

Buzz : huh?

the owner forces buzz in the back

Owner : there

Buzz : Are you crazy?

Owner : be quiet. listen so your bradley's brother?

Buzz : Yes i am. tell me what's going on?

Owner : sorry about that on the phone they were inside.

Buzz : whos they?

Owner : Hardball

Buzz : Hardballs affiliated here?

Owner : Yes.

Buzz : How do ya know my brother?

Owner : bradley and his young girlfriend tiffany were gun club members here at my shop before hardball afflliated here in marco island bradley signed up to be a member of my gun club he also signed up tiffany to be a member too and trained her to use a gun see hardball was getting out of control so to protect themselves they became gun club members though bradley already had experience with using a gun before joining my gun club

Buzz : Yeah he was in the persian gulf era

Owner : I heard shots were fired at that private condo of theirs they said 2 bodies were drugged out I'm sorry your brother could very well be among the 2 with his girlfriend.

buzz stares not liking what he heard.

Buzz : No not bradley,

Owner : hardball is refusing to reveal if the 2 bodies are bradley and tiffany

buzz puts his hand over his face

Buzz : bradley....

Owner : I'm sorry listen though, go back home. okay? I don't suggest digging deep into this. it's too dangerous

Buzz : sorry bradley is my brother I'm not going home

Owner : do you have kid's?

Buzz : I got 4 why?

Owner : Then how would they feel? if they lose you like they possibly did their uncle?

Buzz : I got to do this, i appreicate your concern though I won't let hardball bully me out of finding out what happened to my brother

buzz walks off

Later on

Private Condo

csi was there with a police line that said do not cross

general cade ferrick is seen among the hardball soldiers

Hardball 48 Soldier : well that went well they dropped like the bitches they were, I guess all that training efforts they had was in vain *chuckles*

Cade : the public will acknowledge it was self defense you did good team, we did it, we neturalized the main target. Okay let's get out

Meanwhile

buzz patterson is seen driving in his ford escalade

Buzz : come on bradley where are you?

buzz drives up to where the private condo is but parks accross the street and looks

buzz gets out of his car and walks to a civilian

Buzz : excuse me what are they doing?

Male Civilian : hardball discovered a man who married a kritian elf female way back resides here. and so hardball went in well it was said they got 2 bodies of the residence of the condo

buzz stares upsetly thinking it could be bradley and tiffany.

Buzz : did they say who?

Male Civilian : hardball refuses to reveal the names of the 2 bodies

buzz hides his tears

Buzz : I see

hardball is seen with 2 bodies but the hardball soldiers are barricading the civilians from seeing who the 2 bodies are

buzz cletches his fist

Buzz : None of these people should allow hardball to bully them into silence... HEY YOU HARDBALL JACKASSES WHERE'S MY BROTHER? WHERE'S MY BROTHER YOU ASSHOLES

Hardball 49 Soldier : who is this creep?

the hardball soldiers puts their hand on their assault rifles

Buzz : I'M BUZZ PATTERSON BRADLEY'S BROTHER WHAT DID YOU DO TO HIM?

Hardball 50 Soldier : general we got a problem theirs a guy here who is bradley patterson's brother. and he's gone nuts

Cade : dart him then when you're out of view kill him.

the hardball soldier loads his assault rifle with darts then tries to point it at buzz but then gordon teleports with a shield surrounding him knocking the hardball soldiers back

Buzz : Who?

Gordon : Hi I'm gordon you must be buzz patterson I'm here to take you to your naphew. He's in trouble.

gordon teleports buzz to the sanctuary

Hardball 50 Soldier : you okay?

Hardball 49 Soldier : yes

Cade : what's going on report?

Hardball 49 Soldier : it's the teleporter sir he came back, we saw him he took bradley's brother with him

The Sanctuary

Buzz : you're an envolved human?

Gordon : yes...

Buzz : well what's this about ton pattterson? Is he okay?

Gordon : Look for yourself

buzz see's ton patterson in a coma

Buzz : No what happened to him?

Gordon : hardball soldiers shot him our doctors and nurses are trying to save him

Buzz : look at him, and he's only 25

ashley johnson walks up towards gordon and buzz

Ashley : is that?

Gordon : Yes it's buzz patterson.

Ashley : so you're his uncle?

Buzz : Yes

Ashley : nice to meet you I'm ashley his girlfriend.

ashley and buzz shake hands

Gordon : but what were you thinking trying to pick a fight with hardball that fast?

Buzz : I'm tired of hardball's bullying tactics and their immidation towards their own american civilians

Gordon : They would've killed you if i hadn't stopped them. we can't have you be killed by hardball

Buzz : I see what you're saying...

Gordon : I'll leave you 2 alone i got to let the others know

gordon walks off

Ashley : So you and ton patterson been keeping in contact?

Buzz : No this is my first time in 4 years that i saw ton patterson I haven't spoken to my brother in 4 years either haven't seen him in 4 years either , the last time i saw him he introduced me to judith my half kritian elf niece. but i remember who she was, but i disowned her. and then i felt bad about what i said to her.

Ashley : it took you 4 years to realize that?

Buzz : No i tried to offer my apologies but bradley wouldn't accept it. I guess i couldn't blame him, but now I'm glad bradley has a half kritian elf daughter, i like to make things right for my family

Ashley : you being here by your naphew is a start.

Buzz : What do i tell him if his father was killed by hardball? him and my brother are close

Ashley : I dunno, you'll just half to see

Buzz : My ex wife told me that i should never be stubborn that i should go to my family. well I'm married again

Ashley : Sounds like you got catching up

Buzz : Can i go see him?

Ashley : sure.

buzz and ashley walks in

Buzz : you're his girlfriend nice...

Ashley : listen i got to take care of some stuff so you can stay with him till they need you to walk out

Buzz : thank you.

ashley walks off

Buzz : hey kiddo

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i made a mistake that flashback of maddam venom killing the corrupt cop's wasn't on episode 5th it was episode 6th lol so here's episode 6th

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Topaz Wendell
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow

Guest Starring Krissie Hall
Detective Fred Weleger
Officer Gill Ialing

Station Square

Topaz & Skyler's Apartment

topaz is on the phone with her mom

Topaz : Yeah mom i just got home, skyler had to be called over there. yeah I'm fine i been threatened before yeah the kids are fine, cody just got a AB honor roll in 2nd grade yeah me and skyler are proud of him, yeah we rewarded him with one of the seasons of adventure time on dvd, it's some goofy cartoon show but cody likes it. as for nicole she's okay too, you should see her room i decorated it with the characters from frozen. you should've seen her face light up when she saw it. Yeah you seen frozen perfect film, Oh he is? Oh that's great awwww yeah well okay, I'll talk to ya later then alright love you too bye

topaz hangs up her phone

Meanwhile

Corey : YOU'RE ONLY PISSING US OFF WERE NOT GOING TO TELL YOU AGAIN

Damon : why don't you try saying that without your badge and uniform

another police officer tries to hit damon in the back with a baton but nathan shields him from getting hit and nathan gets hit instead

Nathan : LOOK OUT DAMON UGH

Damon : NATHAN

serge jerrica viessa and lisa arrives

Bernard : I'll stay out of sight

Serge : good idea,

serge jerrica viessa and lisa gets out of bernards van and bernard drives off

Jerrica : look at all those angry police officers.

Viessa : let us know when you want to attack

Serge : no not unless they attack first. I won't have any innocent protestor being killed or hurt by them

Lisa : good call.

serge is seen wearing his disguise so is lisa viessa and jerrica

they walk towards the protestors

suddenly a device goes off that let's them know of kritian elf presence that belongs to the police

Corey : Uh o... look

Skyler : hmm i see.

Corey : looks like their heroes came to their rescue.

Skyler : call them out

lt corey gets on the horn

Corey : it has come to our attention that we got 4 freaks among the crowd of you protesting sheeps, well we can do this the easy or hardway but to say this, the 4 among you protestor sheep dogs are kritian elves, did you really think you can hide in the crowd from us, we got something that lets us know you're there kritian elves step fourth kritian elves

serge lisa viessa and jerrica walks towards them

Serge : alright you got us.

Corey : well you actually care for those protestors.

Serge : I don't want to see them hurt or killed

Corey : oh their not off the hook just because you and the other 3 showed.

Lisa : How could you? when you first became a police officer you took a oath to uphold the law, not terrioze your own civilians

Corey : telling me how to do my job huh?

Serge : no were telling you the original meaning behind being a police officer.

Corey : You kritian elves are so full of yourselves, it's strange even after the battle in new york their are still civilians who defend you

Serge : because we did not kill those people. the naitirks and the zin did

Corey : Oh please, don't use that as an excuse I'm sick of you kritian elves trying to use neux the naitirk, or the other naitirk elves or even the zin as an excuse. your kind killed those people in new york the naitirks and zin did not show up until you kritian elves begin showing up

Jerrica : hon my friend's stopped the invasion, get your fact's straight.

Skyler : this is not getting anywhere.

Corey : Indeed

Serge : skyler wendell I am serge the kritian i am aquainted with judith do you remember her? you were a trusted allie of the kritian elves now what changed that?

skyler ignores serge

Skyler : deploy the chemical weapons we gave them enough chances

skyler walks off

Corey : With pleasure sir

corey and the other police officers begin shooting out chemical weapons all at once

Nathan : no

the chemical weapons hit the street but not only were the non violent protestors were caught in it but so was civilians passing by

Nathan : *coughs* unnk

Lisa : NO THE PROTESTORS

serge stares at the police officer with anger then serge retalites by punching LT corey greginer in the face

Corey : UGGGH

jerrica uses one of her abilities on a police officer that is rapidly kicking a helpless lend a kritian a hand protestor in the ribs killing the police officer

Police Officer : detective wendell let's you get outta here

the police officer escorts skyler to the unmarked police cruiser and they drive off

The Sanctuary

Buzz : you can fly ton patterson that is something special, you are a gifted person with that special gift. I'm proud you are my naphew. you got to fight being shot, don't let hardball win. get well ton patterson, please get well. I don't know if you can hear me or not. your father is possibly been killed with his girlfriend but you got to fight

buzz gets tears in his eyes

Buzz : when you were little i remember when i took you shopping with me you flew around windixie i was so angry that you did that, but then i remember i know the manager well and he kept a secret pretty good,

a young female envolved human nurse comes in

Young Female Sanctuary Nurse : sorry sir visiting hours are over

Buzz : Okay

buzz walks off

ashley johnson is seen staring at lagrine of hers that ton patterson got her

ashley smiles at it

Flashback

Early this year

ashley johnson is seen with the lagrine

Ashley : So baby what do ya think?

Ton : I see you finally decided to try it on.

Ashley : i was too drunk last night remember.

Ton : yeah i know hahahaha you look absotley sexy gorgeous beautiful

Ashley : ooooh my

ton patterson and ashley johnson kiss and they hug

later on they have sex

Ashley : Hey do ya think perhaps were doing this all to soon?

Ton : No i don't think so, I've been single for 2 years and that's a long time to me,

Ashley : i guess anyone who has can feel lonely depending how they feel about being with a woman.

ashley and ton patterson are holding each other

newspaper reads son of cop found murdered girlfriend of deceased arrested and claims she killed him in self defense

54 Precint Madhattin New York

a young female is seen inside her cell with a black eye from being punched by her boyfriend's father a cop

a few cops walk inside krissie's cell

Krissie : What do ya'll want?

the cops drag krissie out of her cell

Krissie : STOP WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

Later on

Debrief Room

sound of bones cracking

krissie screams

Gill : I'll make it less complicated for you if you just tell me why you killed vaughn

Krissie : ugh it was self defense he went nuts just because he saw me on the fb page to lend a kritian a hand, and he was drunk

Fred : Why are you such a good liar you know what were capable of ms hall

Krissie : you already proved that by punching me in the eye once you handcuffed me.

Gill : You killed a member of my family, what do ya expect?

Krissie : You're just as bad as vaughn but i see where he gets it from

gill grabs krissie's throat

Krissie : accck

Gill : listen to me you whore nobody is on your side, you killed my son and you will pay for that, you're not getting released you're going to spend the rest of your life in prison until you an eldery woman

Krissie : i did nothing wrong. it was self defense

officer gill punches krissie again knocking her out

Later on

krissie is seen in her cell again then she wakes up

Gill : let's go

Krissie : huh?

Gill : were taking a ride

gill and fred grab krissie

Swat Van

Krissie : where are you taking me?

the swat team ignores her

then they arrive to a road in the middle of no where

Fred : get out

Krissie : What is this? *gasps* OH NO you wouldn't

Gill : shut up

Fred : You were close to vaughn

Gill : Yeah he wanted to be a cop like me, after college now he never got to do that. good place to kill this bitch no witnesses around.

Krissie : It was self defense.

Gill : Like we really care if you did that you're gonna be killed by us anyway

Krissie : WHAT?

Fred : You heard him

Gill : now let's get started

Krissie : You're all cowards wearing badges

Gill : nobody will miss you bitch

officer gill detective fred and the other swat officers point their guns at krissie to shot her all at once but then a poisoness venom dart hits one of the swat officers in the necl

Swat 54 Precint : ugh ahhhhhh

Gill : WHAT'S GOING ON?

Fred : SOMEBODY'S HERE

the other swat officers and officer gill and detective fred points their guns around

sound of maddam venom laughing

Gill : COME OUT WITH YOUR HAND'S UP

maddam venom is seen with her black female suit on then she cloaks herself with a formula that gives her super reflexes and fast speed temporary like a stealthy ninja

then she picks off each other swat officer one by one with a grab move then slains them with her poisoness venom claws killing them

Fred : I SEE YOU

detective fred tries to shoot maddam venom but maddam venom does a backflip then kicks detective fred then detective fred tries to punch maddam venom but maddam venom uses her super reflexes to dodge it then grabs his hand and breaks it

Fred : AHHHH My hand AHHHHH

maddam venom punches detective fred then kicks him and slains him with her poisoness venom claws

Fred : accccck uggggh

detective fred's body rapidly flitches because the poison was working fast killing him

officer gill uses krissie as a shield

Gill : YOU KILLED MY FRIEND'S YOU FREAK.

maddam venom tries to walk towards officer gill

Gill : DON'T MOVE OR I'LL PUT A BULLET IN HER HEAD. It's bad enough that i lost a family member of mine NOW MY FRIENDS ON THE FORCE WERE KILLED BY A COSTUME FREAK DON'T FOLLOW ME I'LL KILL HER.

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* Oh hun i don't think you're going anywhere

officer gill is shaking

Gill : what are you?

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* Do you feel less oygen coming out of her lungs?

Gill : Huh?

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* when i was in cloak mode i put the formula into cloak mode when i aimed it at your direction it does not affect any person around it other than it's locked on target so the lady right there is safe from it even when by you. you will be gasping for air your stomach will feel like somebody is stabbing you from the inside

Gill : YOU'RE LYING YOU'RE ACCCK aggggggh

officer gill falls to the ground his body rapidly flitches very fast since the poison was working on him fast killing him

Krissie : so you killed them?

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser*

Krissie : I don't know what to say, but i got to get home and take a shower after this.

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* I advise against that, the entire police precint was planning to kill you from the start, their aware now somebody stopped their plans now their going to set up a manhunt you can't go back home they will kill you in public this time and making it justified I'm taking you to a hide out.

Krissie : but what about my family?

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* Your family will be fine and out of danger from them as long as you don't try to contact them.

Krissie : danger from who?

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* Hardball they just got affiliated into the city today

Krissie : You mean i can't see my family anymore?

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* for now.

krissie stares in sadness

gordon teleports

Maddam Venom : *female voice disguiser* this is my friend gordon he will take you to our place

flashback stops

Ashley : ton patterson i love you, but i don't know if you'll understand my intentions

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Post by blackvault100 on Dec 19, 2015 23:21:46 GMT -6

here's episode 7th gordon teleports to station square to find serge lisa viessa and jerrica, serge reveals his infinite rage ability which he almost uses on Lt corey greinger but lisa taughts him outta it.

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Topaz Wendell
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow
Chief Martin Terroll

General Cade Ferrick's Private Airplane

general cade ferrick is on the phone with a hardball affliate with a chief of police of a local hardball affiliate city

Cade : perhaps your men went overboard.

Hardball Enforcer On Speaker : but sir our order was to kill ton patterson was it?

Cade : No i needed him breathing for now. teleporter may have rescued you but if patterson did pull through or not is unknown if he has, good news for us we need to learn what his weakness is then we can kill him

Hardball Enforcer On Speaker : i suppose sir.

Cade : let me know what else you find?

Hardball Enforcer On Speaker : i will sir

Cade : we need leverage against the kritian elves to make them look bad to the public then before. it'll decrease the bodycount after all martin

Martin : yeah tell me about it, i had to arrest 28 people back in boston mashuachuatas for selling kritian elf mechadise

Cade : they never learn wait, adele bernstein

Martin : what about her?

Cade : her fanbase also is consisted of kritian elf supporters, but i may need your help on this perhaps we can use adele bernsteins name to smere the kritian elves and make them get less respect

Martin : what is it?

Cade : well you see *chattering*

later on

Martin : I half to think about that. we may be on the same side but unlike you i got to not mess up my reputation with my city

Cade : I understand no rush intended take your time

Martin : Okay... I'm sure she will love to make herself known to the public but i don't want it to hit her in the back

general cade ferrick and chief of police martin terroll shake hands

Topaz & Skyler's House

topaz watches them mentioning the police deployed chemical weapons on the protestors

topaz's mobile phone rings

topaz picks it up

Topaz : oh honey I'm glad you're okay

Skyler : of course i am

Topaz : what went on?

Skyler : the kritian elves showed up then they influenced the protestors to try to attack the police officers my men are handling them now,

Topaz : I'm glad you didn't get hurt, we got 2 kid's after all.

topaz smiles

Topaz : i know i sure do, I love you honey

Skyler : i love you too

topaz hangs up her mobile phone

topaz looks at her stomach which has a tiny baby bump about to form

topaz smiles

Station Square Skyscraper

bodies of the protestors are seen

serge stares in sadness

Serge : we couldn't save all of the protestors

Damon : NATHAN NATHAN.

nathan holds damon

Nathan : ack acck *coughs*

Damon : Hang in there kid.

a few other remaining lend a kritian a hand protestors are seen staring at their fellow member who is 15 years old the youngest member of the protestor group

Nathan : *acck*

Lisa : his body has alot of the chemicals in it.

Damon : nathan you protected me, thank you kid, you kritians have got to save him he's a damn good kid

LT corey greinger is seen tied up

Corey : *chuckles*

serge goes into his secret form infinite rage mode then grabs officer LT corey greginer's throat

Serge : WAS IT WORTH MURDERING THEM LIKE ANIMALS? WAS IT?

serge tightens his hand on officer LT corey greginer's throat

Corey : acccck acccck.... YOU'RE DIGGING accck your supporters grave doing this accck KRITIAN

Lisa : SERGE CALM DOWN, he's not worth killing

Corey : acccck tell that to few of my men you killed

Viessa : You attacked first.

serge flashsback to when he went into infinite rage mode when valarie almost was killed on the revengers

lisa puts her hands on her brothers shoulder

Lisa : You got too much of a kind heart. don't forget that

Serge : but he murdered them now that one over there might not make it.

Damon : I'll crack this pig's skull with this baseball

damon tries to hit LT corey with his baseball bat but lisa grabs his wrist

Lisa : No don't you're better than him remember that, this is what hardball want's

Damon : How do ya know that? The more people don't fight back against these corrupt pig's the more victims they will create.

Lisa : I understand your emotions let us handle it okay.

Damon : They killed them

Jerrica : the chemicals killed 7 protestors which lead's only 5 remaining however the young lad here is in peril

Damon : well alright you kritians do it the way you should. besides i saw ya'll use your powers on 3 of pig's among them who deployed the chemical weapons and tear gas

Viessa : I'll see if i fuse my ability with jerricas to create the vacum suction

Damon : what's that?

Jerrica : it's where me and viessa fuse our ability together and use it to absorb chemicals and poison

Male Protestor : but would that kill you 2?

Jerrica : No kritian elves bodies are more immue to chemicals then humans our bodies can erase the chemicals

Viessa : correct

Male Protestor : damon wanted to join so that he can make a difference he isn't one of those kid's who think's drugs are cool,

the male protestor has tears in his eyes

Jerrica : okay viessa let's do it

Viessa : yes

viessa puts his hand's on nathan's forehead while jerrica holds her hands against his chest to form the vacum suction ability to suck the chemicals out of nathan

lisa has her hand's on her brother serge's shoulder as they watch viessa and jerrica

the chemicals get sucked into jerrica and viessa

then suddenly damon regains conciousness

Nathan : *wheezes* huh?

Corey : so the little punk makes it

Damon : Oh shut up pig

Nathan : did you kritians save me?

Serge : well actually it was jerrica and viessa

Nathan : thank you... both of you

Jerrica : You're quite welcome

Corey : you're all commiting a crime prison is not an option for you sheep dogs

Damon : can somebody tape his mouth up? Do we have duct tape?

Serge : though we can't take you 5 back home,

Lisa : I know....

Damon : I expect that,

Nathan : my mom is gonna be so upset including heartbroken but i guess theirs no way then that

Damon : so where too planet kritian?

Serge : not yet. I know of a place though

Viessa : what about this rat?

Serge : leave him there. his friends will find him anyway

Later on

Bernard : Yeah i see, damn they killed most of the protestors they dropped like flys but what i can't understand how are you suppose to hide them at this place if you can't find the teleporter?

Serge : well his name is gordon he helped us out during that prison break at hardball's hq

Bernard : Yeah that was a big talk in the newspaper. but still gordon has a ability but not super hearing. has he ever told you where this sanctuary was?

Jerrica : That's the thing he hasn't.

Bernard : Then were in circles here.

Serge : No if gordon is watching on tv or reading a newspaper or the internet then he will find us. then we can make it easy for him too

The Sanctuary

Ashley : the station square police attacked the protestors?

Gordon : Yes they killed most of them, but guess who was there to retalite my kritian elf allies i met in italy

Ashley : could they be looking forward for ton patterson?

Gordon : must be, I half to find serge and the rest to bring them here.

Ashley : find your allies and get them here

gordon nods his head up and down and teleports

ark

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Post by blackvault100 on Dec 19, 2015 23:29:33 GMT -6

here's episode 8th topaz makes her final appearence also i forgot to mention bernard has a sister with disabilities who has been arrested by hardball and so bernard want's the kritian elves to break her out so here's episode 8th

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Topaz Wendell
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow
Chief Martin Terroll

The Sancutary

buzz looks at the texts of his mobile phone

Station Square

Topaz & Skyler's Apartment

skyler is seen arriving and gets out of the unmarked car and waves at the driver driving off

Skyler : thank you

skyler knocks on the door

topaz answers it

Topaz : Oh sweetie I'm glad you're okay

topaz and skyler hug and kiss each other

Skyler : hey i'm trained to handle trouble makers like them

skyler walks in

Topaz : hey by the way when the kid's get to bed how about we take some wine and drink it?

Skyler : I love that.

Topaz : You want me to pick up the kid's?

Skyler : No let's have your mom do that.

Topaz : well I guess I'll tell her

Skyler : one thing about us we always take turns getting the kid's your mom should do this one , right now I'm pampering a very beautiful wife

topaz smiles

Skyler : I know i do a good job, so yes when the kid's get to back we'll have that wine.

skyler's mobile phone rings

Topaz : answer it honey

Skyler : Okay

skyler answers it

Skyler : yes? oh what? oh no, i see, no I'll tell them they need to hear it from me i been to their houses before okay thank you,

skyler hangs up the mobile phone

Topaz : You okay?

Skyler : we deployed the chemical weapons and killed most of the protestors

Topaz : then why do ya look upset?

Skyler : 4 kritian elves were among them 3 officers of my task force were killed by the kritian elves

Topaz : Oh no who?

Skyler : belker scully & rickards

Topaz : Oh skyler I'm so sorry

Skyler : I know it's gonna be hard to tell their families they had kid's

Topaz : you want me to do something?

Skyler : No it's okay you just sit back

Topaz : okay

skyler looks distracted

Skyler : Damn

Topaz : look I'm gonna fix you some milk okay?

Skyler : Okay

topaz walks in the kitchen and looks at her stomach at a small babybump that will be big

Topaz : Hey skyler come in here, i got a suprise.

Skyler : What is it?

Topaz : come in the kitchen and I'll tell ya *chuckles*

suddenly a laser sniper rifle is pointed at topaz from a distance on her left rib cage

gunshot is heard

Topaz : unngh

topaz drops to the floor

skyler rushes in and see's topaz on the kitchen floor nbleeding

skyler holds her

Skyler : topaz? NO NO *whispers* baby you gonna be okay?

Topaz : ugh the baby.

Skyler : what what do ya mean what baby?

Topaz : ugh look at the stomach that i was the suprise.

skyler sees the baby bump that just started

Topaz : ugh the bullet *coughs* hit the baby too why ugh why ugh

topaz coughs then she stops moving since the bullet killed her with her eyes still opened

skyler stares in shock but speechsless that his wife of 9 years just been assianated

skyler gets a text

skyler reads it and the text is from a unknown caller it said

the bodies of the protestors were put in boxes not pretty at all, Now your wife pays for your actions, How does it feel you piece of shit pig?

skyler gets tears in his eyes

skyler goes into rage then he gets on his mobile phone

Skyler : My wife.... my wife SHE'S JUST BEEN MURDERED , I don't know who it was, Get a APB out seal out certains road then contact......... general cade ferrick

Bernard's Apartment

Bernard : Oh shit,

Serge : what is it?

Bernard : topaz the channel 5 news reporter just been murdered by an unknown assisan 19 minutes ago

Lisa : Oh no,

Bernard : I'm shocked too

Damon : can't say i feel sorry for her.

Nathan : who would kill her?

Serge : That's awful so they don't know who did it?

Bernard : police are soughting members of lend a kritian a hand protestors for questioning over the murder.

Damon : They can't blame us for that,

Jerrica : topaz opposed us kritian elves did she not?

Serge : yes but that gives the shooter no right to kill her.

Viessa : Might not had anything to do with that maybe she had enemies for other reasons.

Serge : i can't picture out any supporters of us murdering

Nathan : we can't go home now,

Damon : we can't be caught either.

Bernard : have you figure out how to find your teleporter friend?

gordon teleports

Gordon : No need to i found ya'll

Serge : well hi again friend.

Bernard : Whoa

Gordon : i see you fellows been busy

Bernard : How did you find my place?

Gordon : tracking signatures

Serge : well gordon we need your help, Oh gordon you haven't met my sister this is lisa

Lisa : How do ya do

Gordon : likewise,

Serge : anyway these 4 protestors are the only ones that made it outta those chemical weapons, they can't go home the police think their group did it, what do ya say the sancutary?

Gordon : well i don't like turning someone away in need so yes I'll send these protestors to the sanctuary then I'll help ya'll out with your problems here

Jerrica : thank you,

Damon : sanctuary huh sounds like a hide-out

Gordon : it is.

gordon teleports damon nathan and the other lend a kritian a hand protestors to the sanctuary

Bernard : you're envolved human friend's skills can be a good assett to getting my sister out of prison island.

Serge : I'll ask him when he gets back.

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Post by blackvault100 on Dec 25, 2015 8:07:35 GMT -6

here's episode 9th the cosminians debut so does milton edward's who is a paparazzi but unlike most paparazzi's he is not out to harrass movie stars he's out to piss off hardball

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow
Chief Martin Terroll

Station Square

Prison Island

a hardball chopper is seen landing

detective skyler walks out

skyler walks in with hardball soldiers

Skyler : Has she been any use yet? My patience is now at it's limits now that my beloved wife has been murdered

Hardball Prison Island Guard 1 : sadly no the freak is still playing the pitiful card we oaught to just kill her

Skyler : No i got a better idea,

a unknown alien being who look's human but she isn't on the inside is she has silver hair and very pretty she also look's terrified

Skyler : alright you're pissing me off... I tried with you i tried but I'm gonna try once more and if you don't see that cage over there. your pet right there he looks very cute like a harmless helpless pet he reminds me of kittens i don't know what sort of alien your pet is but yeah he looks harmless, and i know how much you were cuddling him like a teddy bear, so here's what I'll do instead of killing you,

hardball soldiers picks up the alien pet then starts grabbing him by the throat

the alien pet squeaks in pain also with tears in it's eyes

the unknown celestrial female starts nodding her head back and fourth while crying

Skyler : How does that make you feel? It makes you feel sad watching a harmless animal like this be tortured it makes you feel sadness doesn't it? Good BECAUSE THAT;S EXCATLY HOW I FELT WHEN MY WIFE WAS MURDERED IN MY KITCHEN!!! It's freak's like you yhat caused these nut's to shoot people like my wife she was pregnant my wife was pregnant it would've been our 3rd child and first in 5 years, Now tell me What are you? And where did you come from?

the unknown celestrial female starts crying and trying to tell skyler that she can't talk by hand signaling but skyler isn't buying it.

Skyler : kill the little rodent

hardball soldiers try to use bonack shockers on the alien pet which causes him to squeaks in pain the unknown celestrial female starts mute sobbing with tears in her eyes

Skyler : you're so stubborn it's amusing.

then hardball agents escort a male person they arrested

Skyler : NOT NOW. Oh whos this?

Hardball Agent Security Guard 1 : we found this stowaway snooping around taking pictures.

Skyler : is that so huh?

Hardball Prison Island Guard 1 : detective what about her?

Skyler : Oh I'm not finish with her yet, but we'll deal with her again later right now, this fellow Who are you?

skyler looks at the male persons id tag it said's milton edwards

Milton : That answer your question.

Skyler : You got guts sneaking in on that,

Milton : a good paparazzi like's to get his scoop

Skyler : Oh so you're a paparazzi a bit far from home are you?

Milton : i know but it's a pleasure digging dirt on you scum bags

Skyler : Hahahahaha and what makes you think you're going to tell them what you find? You see you're not going anywhere you're under arrest, of course a sentence for tresspassing on goverment propery is 25 Oh you'll have wrinkles

Milton : Don't even bet on that.

skyler punches milton in the stomach

Skyler : I am not in the mood.... My wife was just murdered and i will get the info out of you on what did you find out even if i half to beat it outta you or kill you for that matter.

milton spits in skylers face

Milton : Hows that taste you corrupt pig?

Skyler : KILL HIM FOR THAT

hardball soldiers wail on milton rapidly

Milton : unnk

then suddenly a unknown white orb is seen inside of milton

Milton : *unknown voice* you okay mister edwards?

Milton : Huh? ugh that voice it's like it's coming from me but it's not mine.

Milton : *unknown voice* i know it's hard to explain but I'm going to help you. they can't hear us talking yet. my abilities prevented that,

Milton : abilities? who are you a kritian?

Milton : *unknown voice* No I'm not a kritian elf but I'm from light years away from your planet. I just prevented them from killing you, so as long as I'm attached to you, you're body will be immue to their weapons. okay now I'll make myself known to them

Skyler : he still stands?

Milton : *unknown voice* Your plan to kill mr edward's has failed....

Skyler : WHAT IS THIS? WHY IS YOUR VOICE SOUND DIFFERENT?

hardball soldiers draw their weapons

Milton : *unknown voice* your weapons will not do you any good on me,

the unknown celestrial female stares while smiling also crying with happy tears

Skyler : I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS WHO OR WHAT ARE YOU?

Milton : *unknown voice* I AM , KING COSMO, GUARDIANS OF THE COSMINIANS THE WOMAN YOU HAVE LOCKED THERE, SHE IS MY DAUGHTER, THE PRINCESS OF THE COSMINIANS, YOU TORTURED THIS GLANIA THINKING SHE COULD SPEAK, SHE CANNOT,

Skyler : Okay so she cannot speak? but you're going anywhere I don't know what this is, but you cosminians or whatever aliens you are. are not walking out of here in one piece. kill him or it. my daughter is princess ossisola

Milton : *unknown voice* I just told you your weapons are no good on me, mr edwards is under my protection. stand back now.

skyler including the other hardball soldiers refuse

then king cosmo uses his sonic cry ability on them to pierce their ear drums

hardball soldiers start to scream while cletching their ears so does skyler

Skyler : agggggghhhhhh

king cosmo releases her daughter

king cosmo hug's her daughter

Milton : *unknown voice* you're safe now.

ossisola hug's her pet glania

Milton : *unknown voice* come on we got to flee

Milton : listen how did you 2 get to our planet?

Milton : *unknown voice* I'll explain after we get away from these people.

alarm goes off

Later on

Forest

Milton : Wait you're saying you're parasites? not alien beings?

Milton : *unknown voice* to put it more specicially we are hosts, we can attach ourselves to even other beings even humans

Milton : Reminds me of a movie I saw, but then the princess over here, then she's attached to this female?

Milton : *unknown voice* Sadly her host form was completly lost which resulted in her taking on a peramant human form ,

Milton : So this female who she attached to? was she a person?

Milton : *unknown voice* my daughter catched panalyss

Milton : what? what's that?

Milton : *unknown voice* it's a disease cosminians are alergic too thanks to the zin my daughter catched it a long time ago. which resulted in her cursed to this form like a incomplete vessel

Milton : So you guys delt with the zin?

Milton : *unknown voice* that is correct the zin's main ships were taken out by your heroes called the revengers last year the right when we escaped from the zin ships but unforutley the debrief from the ships knocked us off course where we crashed on your planet

Milton : oh then hardball captured you as well?

Milton : *unknown voice* yes

Milton : ya'll just didn't have any cool luck then

hardball choppers approaches

Milton : Uh o

Milton : *unknown voice* I'll take care of them you're safe remember

Later on

Milton : So all cosminians have their own human forms? but your daughter's is different though because of that zin disease?

Milton : *unknown voice* Yes,

Milton : so she can't talk but she can feel emotions sadness, cry?

Milton : *unknown voice* yes she can also sense other people's emotions* That's her ability. We got to find my ship and take it back

Milton : but if hardball has it chances are they took it out?

Milton : *unknown voice* No it's still active but it's being kept elsewhere. and i know where.

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Post by blackvault100 on Dec 27, 2015 8:38:40 GMT -6

Here's episode 10th stella fenton appears for the rest of the installment, also hardball has ton pattersons kritian elf suit but they can't take it out as it's inverable

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow
Chief Martin Terroll

The Sanctuary

Gordon : So this fellow's sister is being hold prisoner by hardball?

Bernard : Yes she has disabilities her body can be very sensitive to any torture method's hardball put's on her, it could even kill her.

Gordon : Well we can't have that.

Bernard : So you'll help her?

Gordon : Yes this will be easy.

lisa and serge is seen staring at ton patterson being in a coma

Ashley : Seeing him like this is like seeing my brother in a coma. only difference my brother didn't make it
Serge : How did your brother wind up like that?

Ashley : Hardball also the police beated him up when he saw something they didn't want him to see, I couldn't protect him from them, I felt like it was my fault

serge touches ashely's hand with his hand

Serge : Don't say that you're brother know's you care about him so does ton patterson

Lisa : Yeah losing somebody you care about isn't it easy, but you got to be strong for them.

Ashley : you two are kind... he mentioned ya'll before.

Serge : He did huh

Ashley : Yeah hahahaha

Serge : ton patterson is a good man

Buzz : It's nice to see he has friends that care about him oh serge I'm sorry for what i said about the kritian elves 4 years ago

Serge : Hey it's okay, you being here is the apology your heart is very good, we will find out where bradley is,

Buzz : thank you... How's judith doing?

Serge : recovering her eye sight, she will be back again and fight hardball like before. this time stronger

Buzz : i really got to see planet kritian.

Serge : we can arrange that eventually.

Buzz : but first i got to get bradley back.

Ashley : I got to get back to my house well my other house the one that isn't free and see if it looks like anyone has been in

Buzz : another house?

Ashley : yeah my main home the sanctuary isn't it's more like my home away from home, except it's free

ashley walks off

gordon walks towards her

Gordon : I got a break out plan again. involving that disabled girl

Ashley : before you start that teleport me back to my home i got to check in on stuff.

Gordon : you got it

gordon teleports ashley

New York Madhattin

Ashley's Apartment

gordon teleports with ashley

Gordon : it don't look like anyones been here,

Ashley : No but i got to check my messages

ashley checks her voice mail which has 19 new voice messages

Gordon : 19 huh.

then after she gets to the 19th one a familiar voice is heard but it's not familiar to her but to gordon

Stella On Speaker : *country accent* excuse me? are you ms ashley johnson

Gordon : *whispers* That voice

Stella On Speaker : *country accent* I'm stella, stella fenton you don't know me but I'm aquaited with your boyfriend from back in high school well we weren't boyfriend and girlfriend since my best friend rachel beat me to that, listen I like to meet with you and ton patterson if that's okay, I had a run in with hardball well I'll explain since were fighting on the same side, please call me back my cell phone number should appear on your caller ID we need 3 need to meet at your place, to discuss what i know of what hardball is now doing too thank you. and tell ton patterson i said hi

Gordon : i know her.

Ashley : you know this girl?

Gordon : In italy when i first encountered ton pattersons half kritian elf sister she was there too,

Ashley : I hate her already

Gordon : who?

Ashley : Stella fenton. her voice get's on my nerves

Gordon : I'm sure she's okay, she just sound's spacey that's all.

Ashley : spacey girls like her attend to fall for guys already not single.

Gordon : Hahaha you sure are the suspious type.

Ashley : Well I'll call her back none the less. see how she looks

ashley johnson gets on her mobile phone to call stella fenton

Ashley : Yes? stella? yes this is ashley johnson, yes how are you? Oh good so you want to meet? right yes I'm at my place. yes I'll text you the address fine. okay .

Gordon : you're not gonna tell her about ton patterson?

Ashley : I'll do that when she gets here

Later on

stella fenton knocks on the door

ashley answers it

Stella : *country accent* well i do declare now you must be ashley johnson

stella offers ashley a handshake ashley hestitates a little but she goes through it

Ashley : Come right in.

Stella : *country accent* I like what you done to the place.

stella see's gordon

Stella : *country accent* well i do declare now if it isn't the teleporter. what a surpise to meet you again. so where's that handsome boyfriend of yours? I haven't seen him since high school

Ashley : well you see.

Later on

The Sanctuary

stella sees ton patterson at his hospital bed in a coma

Stella : *country accent* hardball did this to him?

Ashley : yes

Stella : *country accent* what are ton pattersons chances of pulling through.

Ashley : we don't know.

serge walks up towards stella

Serge : stella you remember me right?

Stella : *country accent* Yes uh serage right?

Serge : no ma'm serge....

Stella : *country accent* Oh well my apologies nice to see you again.

Serge : this is my sister lisa, you didn't meet her last time

Lisa : Hi stella

Stella : *country accent* howdy... oooh is that a marrige ring? oooh did some kritian elf guy took ya?

Lisa : he is a guy yes, but he isn't a kritian elf he's a human

Stella : *country accent* Talk about rare. I'm so happy for you

jerrica and viessa walks up towards the others

Jerrica : We may know how we can get ton patterson to recover faster.

Viessa : but it requires going back to planet kritian ,

Ashley : please do that if it'll help him please.

Jerrica : i figured that. listen me and viessa will go back to planet kritian to get the healing recovery potion

Serge : I remember that 2 kritian elf healers used it on valarie last year when princess shiba poisoned her.

Viessa : well they got a potion for it as well,

Serge : go get it.

Jerrica : we sure will the rest of you can stay here while me and viessa do this

jerrica & viessa walks off

General Cade Ferrick's Private Hardball Plane

Cade : well were almost at one of hardball's facility

Martin : Thank you for that drink...

Cade : You're welcome,

Martin : ton patterson could remain at large still?

Cade : probly but my men have comprestated the kritian elf suit of his, we should see the process of it.

later general cade ferricks private plane lands

general cade ferrick and chief martin terroll walks out

hardball soldiers saulte general cade ferrick

later on

the kritian elf suit of ton pattersons is seen

Hardball Researcher 1 : yes sir the soldiers have tried everything it doesn't damage the suit well except for one thing the men didn't go in there to fill the suit full of bullet holes

Cade : that suit is the only thing that makes ton patterson mostly inverable we can't let him get that suit.

Hardball Soldier Facility Guard 1 : asumming if he's still breathing

Cade : He is, I know if our teleporter fiend rescued him then. get the flamethrowers out

Hardball Researcher 1 : we did that sir, no damage.

Cade : get the men to use their assault rifles in there

Hardball Researcher 1 : on it general

Cade : listen up men get in there and fill that suit full of holes i want that suit tore apart it's important ton patterson does not get this suit again

hardball soldiers heads inside then they point their assault rifles at the male kritian elf suit

Cade : Shoot

hardball soldiers shoot at the kritian elf suit all at once but it doesn't damage it

Cade : DAMMIT alright team get outta there we'll just half to lock the suit inside this room with full guards

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Here's Episode 11th Part Two of The Second Opinion crossing over from princess lena of the kritians episode 11th on this episode bernard's handicapped sister dee debuts also skyler assaults her & nolan topaz's camera man decides to open up a new facebook community page to honor her memory

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow
Chief Martin Terroll
Dee Kilow

Guest Starring Chuck Berrow

Part Two Continuing From Princess Lena of the Kritians

Station Square

Prison Island

Skyler : You can't get in contact with him? I see, yeah that's why.

skyler hangs up the phone

Skyler : well general ferrick left marco island florida already. also his cell phone goes to voice mail. looks like we'll half to deal with this on our own. no i got to attend to services for my departed wife.

Hardball Prison Island Guard 1 : my codolese

Skyler : thank you

skylers mobile phone rings

skyler picks it up

Skyler : Yes? good all main routes are blocked off, good. no I'll figure out how to respond to my wife being murdered but when i do we will respond heavy...yes thank you.... bye

skyler hangs up the mobile phone and walks off

Skyler : get the attack choppers into the hair, they couldn't have gotten far.

The Sanctuary

beeping rapidly

Buzz : WHAT'S GOING ON?

Male Envolved Human Doctor : HE'S SLIPPING AWAY

Buzz : No NO TON NO

Male Envolved Human Doctor 2 : SIR YOU CAN'T COME IN

Buzz : BUT THAT'S MY NAPHEW

Ashley : buzz take it easy,

ashley stares upsettly at ton patterson being in a coma since he's nearly had it

ashley slowy has tears coming out of her eyes

Lisa : What's going on?

Female Envolved Human Nurse : we might be losing him

Buzz : no...

Jerrica : Not so fast,

Lisa : viessa jerrica , where's the healers?

Viessa : their out on an assignment, but we got one of their potions

Jerrica : we don't know if it'll have a side effect on him or not since he's not a kritian elf,

Buzz : I don't think you should give that to him if you don't know what it'll do to him,

Jerrica : what choice do we have? we half to try,

Buzz : Okay okay

Ashley : yes please give it to him.

jerrica viessa gets inside ton pattersons hospital room

Ashley : hurry move outta the way so they can put this green potion inside his fluids

jerrica and viessa pours the green potion into ton pattersons fluid thingy

suddenly the beeping noise goes back slowy

Jerrica : we did it,

Viessa : yeah what a relief

buzz & ashley smiles

no side effect to it

Envolved Human Doctor : He's gonna be okay now,

Ashley : but why isn't he out of his coma?

Jerrica : he will be out of his coma in 5 hours,

ashley holds ton pattersons hand and smiles

Ashley : baby you're gonna be fine.

Buzz : I guess me and my naphew got alot of catching up to do

Lisa : just be sure to not pressure him he just recovered from gunshot wounds

Later on

Buzz : Wow I'm so nervous

Lisa : Hey don't be

Buzz : The last time we spoke it was on a not so nice discussion between me and his father and that well he wasn't fond of, but now I respect you kritian elves... my apologies to you and your people too

Lisa : don't apologize you didn't know, but now we can focus on the actual enemy hardball

buzz nods his head up and down

Prison Island

Dee : why are you doing this? I didn't do anything to you people

Ronny : Oh stop your whining bitch, it's people like you that make our jobs harder, you're lucky the orders were to bring you back in one piece. otherwise I would've put this casing in your head , don't think you being handicapped would prevent me from doing that.

dee starts shaking

skyler walks in

Skyler : excuse me sgt I like to have a discussion with this bitch.

Ronny : she's all yours sir she's driving me crazy.

Dee : did i do something wrong?

skyler stares at her but ignores her for a little bit

Dee : well?

Skyler : it must feel good having somebody that cares about you... like that nerd brother of yours. does it?

Dee : uhhhh well. *stutters* well I don't know

skyler slaps dee on the head

Skyler : TALK TO ME WITH A MORE PROPER SPEECH YOU USELESS PIECE OF TRASH

dee starts sobbing.

Skyler : STOP CRYING YOU'RE PISSING ME OFF

skyler grabs dee by the throat and slams her against the wall

Dee : UNNK,, You're ugh choking me

Skyler : Let me tell you something you bitch I became a widower today and I'm not in the mood to put up with you either, it's people like you are the reason my beloved wife was murdered by a crazed nut. so don't disrespect me or I'll put you in the ground, and that will be perfectly legal , Do i make myself clear?

dee slowy shakes her head up and down then skyler lets her go and walks off

Dee : sorry for the loss of your wife.

Skyler : I'm not done with you remember that, and get use that you're staying locked up for good

dee starts sobbing and shivering since she was traumatized with the abuse she gotten from hardball

The Sanctuary

Bernard : so he's gonna be fine, that is great...

Stella : *country accent* Oh such awesome news that is, I'm so thrilled

Ashley : we finally did it, my man will be out of his coma too soon.

Buzz : I wonder what I'll say?

Lisa : don't be nervous your naphew requested to see you remember? so he must be forgivenable for him to say he wants to see his uncle

Buzz : I forgot, hahahahaha

Serge : so ton patterson is outta the neck of the woods good job you 2

serge hugs both jerrica & viessa

Viessa : Oh we should more often *chuckles*

Stella : *country accent* well i declare now, looks like your man is gonna be okay, i got alot to say to him when he gets up Oh most certainly i do

ashley silently copy cats stella with a angry grin since she dislikes stella

Serge : so how are stuff back home?

Jerrica : princess lena is relaxing mostly,

Serge : what about my wife?

Jerrica : I didn't ask hun.

Viessa : I'm sure she's doing fine knowing you're being a hero.

Jerrica : yeah what viessa said, lena is a fighter even when she's pregnant, you're sister is strong.

Channel 5 News Building

nolan is staring at a picture of topaz wendell

Nolan : Damn

the manager walks in

Chuck : nolan, is her stuff cleared?

Nolan : Mr berrow please be patience her family has not gotten here yet,

Chuck : Oh well sorry i know it's not easy knowing topaz is gone, I was selfish....

Nolan : i can't believe she is gone , remember she always had a good sense of humor,

Chuck : She sure did. damn she was young

Nolan : yeah 35 years old,

Nolan : they better catch the asshole that killed her, she was such a good worker & friend, I know it's got to be rough on skyler he really loved her so much.

Chuck : I gotta get some fresh air I'm getting upset being in her room

Nolan : Okay,

chuck walks out since topaz's room is full of good memories

Nolan : I got an idea for a new facebook community to honor topaz's memory.

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here's episode 12th decided to put bradley & tiffany in this installment after all, but in a flashback yep episode 12th is in all flashback episode also tiffany kerwin's ex husband eric debuts after being mentioned a few times in previous m.a.s.k cinematic universe installments of phase one, bradley proposes to tiffany unaware that eric walked in also a fun fact skyler wendell is the brother of kevin wendell the lead role of the second phase one installment monkey-alliance1.freeforums.net/thread/435/3rd-streets-fourth-act-saga

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow
Chief Martin Terroll
Dee Kilow

Guest Starring Eric Foster

Special Guest Stars Bradley Patterson
Tiffany Kerwin

A Month Ago

Marco Island

Private Condo

tiffany comes out in a bikini out on the back where bradley is

Tiffany : I figured you be out here,

bradley hides something in his pocket

Bradley : I thought i enjoy the quiet, nothing good on tv right now

Tiffany : getting fresh air seems more interesting than tv,

Bradley : So how was work?

Tiffany : Got that raise,

tiffany shows bradley her check

Bradley : That's great

bradley and tiffany hug each other

Tiffany : Now we can take that vacation in north dakota ,

Bradley : now that's something to enjoy. if it's with you which of course it is

bradley and tiffany kiss each other with their hands around each other

Tiffany : though it only be us. not my kid's

Bradley : What?

Tiffany : eric refused to have me bring the kids out of the states.

Bradley : I don't understand why?

Tiffany : with eric he doesn't half to have a reason,

Bradley : If you want I can talk to him,

Tiffany : No it's okay, it'll be just us going, it'll feel weird having my boyfriend talk to my ex husband to fight my battles for me.

Bradley : our battles, but enough of that right now, but close your eyes i got a suprise

Tiffany : what's the occusaion sweetie?

Bradley : Oh something i got

tiffany closes her eyes while smiling

bradley reaches in his pocket to get out a wedding ring

Bradley : Okay open them

tiffany looks at the wedding ring

Tiffany : *gasps*

bradley gets on his knees and proposes

Bradley : tiffany, I love you very much, I thought it over, you are the woman i want to be with, I know most people you know feel I'm old enough to be your father which they are correct i'm a 58 year old man but i don't want to feel lonely, so please marry me?

Tiffany : You won't be lonely I'll marry you, YES I'LL MARRY YOU

Bradley : HAHAHAHAHA

Tiffany : yes I'll marry you

tiffany and bradley hug and kiss each other

a unknown male is seen clapping his hand's sarcastically

Bradley : huh?

Tiffany : Eric? What are you doing here?

Eric : bravo bravo indeed, I must say that was unexpected from him even for me,

Tiffany : What are you getting at?

Bradley : Eric look

Eric : I ain't finished, with all my friends out there who marry gorgeous beautiful women one of them I know marries one that sticks out, and i say stick out as in 31 years behind by age, I figured hey they will date but i don't think they will settle , But what do ya know? They do settle.

Tiffany : yes I agree to marry bradley, you have no say in that matter.

Eric : I loved you tiffany ever since i first laid eyes on you in high school,

Tiffany : Eric don't do this,

Eric : What does patterson got that i don't?

Tiffany : well he's not a hot head. he cares and respects women he cares about his enviorment , he treats me good he supports my decisions he's good to me, I love him that's all their is to it.

Eric : I reject your marriage to him.

Tiffany : *scoffs*

Bradley : tiffany is the age where she can make her own decision

Eric : BUTT OUT

Tiffany : You know what if you're be hostile like this Just get out. i don't need my ex husbands permission on who i should marry you're not my dictator

Eric : I can't believe you chose to marry an older man OLD ENOUGH TO BE YOUR FATHER

Bradley : THAT'S IT I WANT YOU OUT

bradley grab eric but only for a second since eric punches bradley in the nose

Bradley : UUGH

Tiffany : BRADLEY

Eric : Nice try old man.

Tiffany : You okay?

Bradley : ugh yes.

Tiffany : Oh you're bleeding,

tiffany stares angrily at eric

Tiffany : GET OUT...

Eric : Fine I'll get out, I'm calling my lawyer I don't want you to ever make contact with our children again
I'll see you in court tiffany you're gonna lose our kid's

Tiffany : You're gonna look silly, fighting to file a restraining order to keep me away from our children over a marriage proposal from my boyfriend.

eric walks off

tiffany has her hands around bradley's forehead

Bradley : ugh sorry I'm useless

Tiffany : No you're not.

Bradley : I promise he won't keep you from my kid's I'm gonna call our lawyer so you can have custody over your children

Tiffany : yeah if he want's to fight in court then we'll do that, Oh poor baby your nose is still bleeding

Bradley : Yeah i think he broked it

Tiffany : I'll get a tissue for your nose

tiffany kisses bradley on the head and walks inside

Later on

bradley is on the sofa with a tissue against his nose tiffany sits by him

Tiffany : your nose does look bruised. but not fully.

Bradley : still hurt though,

Tiffany : Yeah it does doesn't it? so have you contacted ton patterson & judith about us getting married?

Bradley : No not yet.

Tiffany : but why do you hesitiate?

Bradley : I'm trying to figure a way to ton patterson & judith might not ever thought i would settle with you, you're gonna be their step mother, which will be the second time they will get a step mother, a beautiful step mother.

Tiffany : move over wicked step mother of cinderella *chuckles*

Bradley : I'll see if the bleeding stopped

bradley checks the tissue

Bradley : Yeah it did.

Tiffany : Listen I think we should throw a party here soon,

Bradley : yeah because i proposed to you

Tiffany : excatly. listen I'll make the arrangements with my members of lend a kritian a hand they will like that.

Bradley : that's cool.

tiffany gets on her mobile phone

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Here's episode 13th another flashback which also reveals if bradley and tiffany were killed by hardball or not also a unknown figure appears but for some reason this unknown figure knows bradley patterson who could this thing be? also the rest of the lend a kritian a hand protestors get slaughtered by hardball soldiers

Venom Fang's

The Cast

Ashley Johnson/Maddam Venom
Ton Patterson/Flyboy
Serge the Kritian
Jerrica the Kritian
Viessa the Kritian
Lt Corey Greinger
Gordon Hemrock/The Teleporter
Nathan Ladderack
Lisa the Kritian
Damon Cravage
Milton Edward's
Sgt Ronny Burkes
Stella Fenton
General Cade Ferrick

Also Starring Buzz Patterson
Detective Skyler Wendell
Nolan Branford
Bernard Kilow
Chief Martin Terroll
Dee Kilow

Guest Starring Eric Foster
Gwen Baldwin
Malora Ganshea
Basilla Oakely
Vera Kaplan
Toby Pratt
Jacob Tabor
Chris Ragsdale
Phillip Stullings

Special Guest Stars Bradley Patterson
Tiffany Kerwin

A Few Weeks Ago

Private Condo

Gwen : So that's where i recommend.

Bradley : I'll keep that in mind,

Toby : Thanks to you advertising our facebook page we've gotten even new followers.

Gwen : yes these victims they tell us their hardball encounter, which is a violet encounter, one guy i remember he said hardball soldiers wailed on a guy good then stomped his skull killing him, he had it on camera with his mobile phone luckily though he sent a back-up to a loved one just before they seized it and deleted it they gave the witness a beating too but he was later released since they didn't know he sent a copy to someone else,

Toby : i think if they would've known that he would've been either killed or arrested

Malora : our best/best friend finally gonna be married again.

Tiffany : this time it'll be very sucessful *chuckles*

Malora : I'm happy for you we all are. I'm sure even courtney would've been

Tiffany : Yeah I hate that hardball killed her & her husband They were good friends. they will be missed.

Malora : I cried when i first heard they were murdered by hardball soldiers

Vera : Oh losing them was very hard on all of us. anyone been in contact with tiffany's parent's since they been murdered

Tiffany : i ran into their parents a few months ago other than that hadn't seen them since, courtney's little girl now reside with her mother and father. it sickned me when those hardball apologists mocked and gloated over her demise like that,

Malora : I remember they were cruel and heartless,

Bradley : hey thanks for helping me out with the shrimp I appreciate that.

Toby : You're welcome man that some good shrimp

Bradley : Good thing whole food's had it on sale.

Toby : Tell me about it that dipping sauce too for those crackers over there Oh man that is very wow...

Jacob : plenty of wine they catered the best home made wine picked from their winery garden ladies first

Gwen : thank you gentlemen

Jacob : You're welcome hahahaha

Eric Foster's House

knock on the door

Eric : Hold on

eric walks to the door and opens it it was a private detective

Eric : Mr Stullings thank you for coming.

Phillip : I got your text, Yes we can do this, especially now that president barrett calary has given the go ahead to seize the condo

Eric : Good very good,

Phillip : Whenever they do that, hardball will either keep the condo for themselves or it will be auctioned. by the way are you sure?

Eric : very much yes, she's broke my heart too much so why do ya ask?

Phillip : Because chances are hardball will likely kill her rather than arrest her.

Eric : that's no concern over me, She made her choice the moment she idolized the kritian elves & plan to marry a man old enough to be her father

Phillip : Okay, well the deal is in place anyway so bradley will likely be apprehended by hardball while they'll likely kill tiffany patterson they have no use for her

Eric : I checked on that lend a kritian a hand facebook page she's throwing a proposal party as we speak.

Phillip : then hardball will kill any of the guests but leave bradley patterson alive to arrest him, unless he provokes them,

Eric : also i don't want my kid's to ever know what hardball will do to their mother, I want them to think she walked out on them, Can you arrange it like that?

Phillip : of course i can. my contacts inside hardball have it under control

Eric : Good want a beer?

Phillip : no thank you I got to drive remember?

Eric : i mean one i don't want mean more than one

Phillip : yeah why not

Eric : this saves the trouble of going to court after all, thanks to hardball

phillip and eric laugh

Phillip : ah yes

Marco Island Police Department

Cade : okay that's the condo which you all know that as it sticks out like a sore thumb the suspects bradley patterson & tiffany kerwin are in there, the orders are simple we take bradley patterson alive but as for his girlfriend that's the opposite we have no use for her,

Hardball Beach Patrol Agent 1 : but i thought we were gonna kill patterson too

Cade : we are but not yet, i got ideas i will make sure patterson will hurt slowy before killing him

hardball agents and soldiers chatter with agreement

Cade : Okay let's do this, Move out

general cade ferrick walks off

Private Condo

laughter

Tiffany : it's an honor that you all came, and that i have your blessings on this marriage, the man who is known to us all was at first married to a kritian elf woman a woman who first came into his life in 1981, well he will explain more of that to you.

Bradley : Well back then in high school my luck with girls was never a good one, but then one time in 1981 on a cold night coming home on my way back from college I saw what was a space capsule that has crashed I checked it i was nervous i didn't know what thing would come outta that space capsule but i didn't even expect the thing to be a beautiful elf woman , which became the first time i found true love I married her had 2 children one half kritian elf female who would later resemble her mother, when i lost slyvia it tore me up then several years later i married again but that one was less sucessful compared to my first marrige now finally I found love again the woman of my dreams tiffany kerwin, though she maybe 32 years younger than me but age is not what has to count for 2 being in love, as long as the 2 are happy , thank you all for supporting tiffany accepting my proposal to her, It means alot to me,

bradley and tiffany put their hands around each other. while smiling at each other.

Toby : Hey tiffany if i remember correctly what was that song you liked so much, By Lionel Richie umm oh wait Now i remember

Ballerina Girl by Lional Richie plays

Bradley : Wanna dance?

Tiffany : I love too

the other members of lend a kritian a hand protestors cheer

hardball soldiers are seen surrounding the area with snipers

a young 22 year old male college student who is wearing a white dress shirt with a black tie including black pants and black plated shoes is seen staring at the hardball soldiers

Male College Student : what are those brutes up too this time?

suddenly a unknown growl is heard inside the male bathroom catching the attention of the young male college dude

Male College Student : hmm?

the 22 year old male college student looks inside

Male College Student : Is their a dog in here?

then suddenly the 22 year old male college student sees what the noise was then his eyes froze with fright

Male College Student : *gasps*

the 22 year old male college student screams but it was strained since the unknown being begins to pick up the poor 22 year old male college with it's mouth which it shows the shadow reflection of the being on the wall picking up the 22 year old male college student with it's mouth then swallowing him

then suddenly the unknown being makes a belch noise which causes the 22 year old male college students black plated shoes to fall out of it's mouth onto the entrance to the male bathroom then suddenly it shows the shadow reflection of the being on the wall changing into a young woman

Unknown Female : *demonic female voice* Bradley

the unknown female's hand is seen sticking out of the entrance of the male bathroom

Hardball Sniper 1 : were in postion

Cade : not yet.... almost though remember drop any resident in there except for bradley if he tries to use a gun shoot but not enough to kill him He is mine...

Hardball Sniper 2 : copy that sir.

Private Condo

toby's mobile phone rings

Toby : Oh it's basilla hey girl where are you? everyone is here except you,

Basilla : yeah about that, listen my chevy is acting up again i can't get there basically

Toby : Oh that's a shame

Basilla : is that music i hear?

Toby : yeah tiffany and bradley are slow dancing

Basilla : awww how sweet, i would love to see that

Toby : well we took pictures, so we'll be sure to show them

Basilla : that would be good thank you. well tell tiffany I'm sorry

Toby : it's okay she ll understand okay bye

suddenly lionel richie song was off the members of lend a kritian a hand protestors clap

tiffany and bradley who are holding hands bow

Toby : Hey tiffany basilla said she couldn't make it her chevy is acting up again,

Tiffany : awwww well that's okay,

Bradley : I'll see if i can fix it,

Toby : expert on vehicles?

Bradley : i use to work partly at a super lube garage hey it maybe a long time ago but I still have the skills,

Tiffany : She will love that....

Malora : so basilla couldn't make it here,

Gwen : Nope vehicle trouble again,

Malora : Hey tiffany do ya have any nail polish i can use?

Tiffany : Yeah upstairs in our bathroom

Malora : thank you.

malora walks upstairs into the bathroom

suddenly the hardball snipers see her

Hardball Sniper 1 : one target spotted, location the upstairs bathroom orders sir?

Cade : attack

Hardball Sniper 1 : Yes sir

the hardball snipers points it's laser rifle at malora's forehead then the hardball sniper shoots malora in the head but it was a poisoness dart that was shot at her rather than a bullet and it was one of hardballs design

Malora : *screams* UNNK

suddenly tiffany and bradley and the other lend a kritian a hand protestors overhear her scream

Bradley : huh?

Tiffany : That was malora

malora walks fast outta the bathroom screaming in pain from the poisoness dart that is slowy killing her

Toby : MALORA WHAT'S WRONG?

then suddenly malora falls onto the stairs which the poisoness dart kills her

Bradley : She's been shot with a poisoness dart

then suddenly hardball soldiers raid the private condo all at once with gunshots

Toby : IT'S HARDBALL

hardball soldiers shoot toby all at once killing him

Toby : ugh unnk ugghh

Tiffany : NOOO

Jacob : I GOT A FAMILY DON'T SHOOT

jacob slowy backs up as hardball soldiers surround him then shoot him dozens of times killing him

hardball soldiers sees vera but shoot her which their aim was sorta off since they shot vera in the shoulder gwen sees her and tries to help her but they shoot vera in the head then as she tries to run out another hardball soldier shoots gwen in the hip

Gwen : uggh

gwen falls to the pavement

Gwen : *gasping for air* no no don't shoot I just had a baby ugh

hardball soldiers shoot gwen in the leg 2 times causing her to scream in pain

Gwen : *sobs in pain*

hardball soldiers nod their heads at each other then they shoot gwen in the head dozens of times killing her

gunshots from hardball continues as they kill more lend a kritian a hand protestors

tiffany stares at the bodies of her members then she sobs helplessly

Tiffany : They slaughtered them

Bradley : TIFFANY RUN

Tiffany : NO NOT WITHOUT YOU, I LOVE YOU

Bradley : YOU GOT TOO I CAN'T LET HARDBALL KILL YOU LIKE THEY KILLED YOUR FRIENDS WERE GONNA BE MARRIED I'LL HOLD THEM OFF I WON'T LET THEM LAY A FINGER ON YOU, RUN

Tiffany : NO NOT WITHOUT YOU.

bradley kisses tiffany

Bradley : I LOVE YOU TOO RUN

tiffany runs off

bradley gets out his pistol to try to defend himself against hardball

tiffany realizes hardball has the entire outside of the condo surrounded as she barricades herself into her room then suddenly tiffany's eyes feel weak

Tiffany : ugh i feel fainty,

tiffany then passes out on the floor as black smoke surrounds her then the same unknown being who changed into a female is seen by tiffany then the unknown being uses a ability of hers to lift a unconcious tiffany into the air to teleport her to a unknown location in which that the unknown being heads to

Bradley : dammit i can't see

then suddenly the tear gas clears but then a dart is lounged inside bradleys shoulder by a hardball soldier but not a poisoness dart like the one lounged into malora's forehead

Bradley : uggh unnn

bradley goes unconcious

Hardball Sniper 1 : mission accomplish target neutralized

Cade : well done team, I'll head that way to see the body count.

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