Post by blackvault on Nov 11, 2013 12:00:02 GMT -6
Here's a one chapter story yall
Meet Patrica Hardy a 21 year old atlanta georgia college girl who is driving back home to miami florida on vacation so that she can visit her mother and boyfriend... and she first got her driver's license when she was 19 ,
The Everglades
a ford escape is driving on the road and a kelly rowland song called work is being heard on there then it goes to the driver who is a female wearing a white cascade blouse and a black mini skirt and black style female sandals she is grooving to the music and copying off the lyrics that she can memorize then her mobile phone rings... patrica looks at the caller id and stops her car on the grass while she's talking
Baby what are you doing? Asks Patrica ,
The other person talking to patrica on the phone is her boyfriend shane
Seeing how far you are, replies Shane,
33 miles from miami, I'm at the everglades i stopped the car too because you know i can't talk to you on the phone and drive at the same time said Patrica , Shane replies Of course sorry about that babe I keep forgetting i love you
Patrica replies i love you too see you in miami
patrica hangs up her mobile phone and cranks her ford escape up and drives back on the road
MIAMI BEACH 2 HOURS LATER
despite it being cold elsewhere miami florida has a nice warm going to the beach day for others, like patrica and her boyfriend both aren't swimming but they are getting a sun tan patrica has her black bikini on and her boyfriend shane has his swimming trunks on...
Perfect weather don't you agree said Shane , Patrica replies hun after spending so much time in atlanta where it's freezing i agree...
MIAMI FLORIDA 3 HOURS LATER
patrica comes out of her mother's house
Wait patrica said's her mother, Patrica replies what is it?
You don't half to do that for me... said's patrica's mom But i do mom you need more organic foods look at all the stuff you got in there that isn't healthy.... Believe me mom you got less organic stuff in the house, I'll get you something healthy said Patrica
Her Mom replies okay if you say so
20 Minutes Later
as patrica was on her way back to her mom's house after buying organic foods and veggies her radio goes static
patrica taps the stereo then something catches her attention and it was an alien spacecraft
OH DEAR Patrica shouts out she desperately tries to kick the pedal to drive off fast but her ford escape started to break down since the alien spacecraft was causing that... then her ford escape wouldn't crank up then she desperately tries to run off but a beam of light from the alien spacecraft surrounds her
no no somebody please help me Patrica cries out
but nobody heard her and she was beamed on board the alien spacecraft as she screams
then the alien spacecraft rides off into outta space
SPACECRAFT INTERIOR
inside the spacecraft the aliens are revealed to be a alien carnivorous plant race who have a weird looking expression on their face which makes them look like they are smiling and their is a pod inside the pod is patrica being suspended in animation the pod she was in keeps her body and white cascade blouse and black mini skirt and footwear
THE PRESENT
the spacecraft makes it's way to it's home planet 100 light years from earth in the creetux star system the spacecraft lands on the alien carnivorous plant monsters home planet called planet nelex the pod carrying patrica opens up which patrica opens her eyes she looks around
an alien carnivorous plant notices patrica out of her pod and patrica gasps at the sight of the alien carnivorous plant monster but it looks harmless... and patrica quickly calms down
Gee i must've been out for a few hours said Patrica
however patrica think's she's only been away from earth for a few hours but she's unaware that she's been in suspended animation for a few months
the alien carnivorous plant speaks out in alien language @@!@#$$$@@!##$$%%@!!##@!
patrica responds in confusion I can't understand you
the alien carnivorous plant does a hand gesture to get patrica to follow him off the spacecraft
Oh i see you want me to follow you? Okay I can do that said Patrica
patrica follows the alien carnivorous plant off the spacecraft revealing that she's on another planet she gasps at the skyview where the night sky shows a distant planet and 2 moons
Wow patrica i don't think you're on earth Patrica said to herself...
patrica looks at her surroundings and it's a village with the alien carnivorous plant race that abducted her but she is still unaware of why she was abducted but looks around and sees that the village has tiki hut type houses.... It's like a star wars movie... patrica said to herself
Patrica asks in a nervous way, Okay you all seem pretty harmless, so how about you drop me off back on earth, Please....
patrica stare at the direction of the footsteps midget carnivorous plant monsters come running in towards patrica shouting out yak yak yak yak
Patrica gasps but smiles at the same time since she thinks the midget carnivorous plant monsters look so cute awwww look at this.... aren't you all so cute and cuddely wuddely yeah you little fellows look harmless the midget carnivorous plant respond with a yak yak yak noise then they jump and bounce up and down in front of patrica as she laughed nervously and replies Uhh how cute... then the midget carnivorous plant monsters start jumping and bouncing around in circles then as patrica almost loses her balance the midget carnivorous plant monsters surprisingly lift patrica up with their hands and carry her off despite being midgets.... Patrica Shouts oooh dear HELP MEEEEEEEE
they carry her to a big huge tiki arena suddenly the midget carnivorous plant monsters toss her to the floor
Patrica grunts ....
patrica looks at her surroundings and notices thorns and vineroots inside where she's at also a alien looking tree ... then looks back at the midget carnivorous plants who were still making a yak yak noise...
This is just too weird said patrica
then the alien looking tree turns out to be moving and it reveals to have a mouth and eyes which it's not an alien looking tree but a carnivorous plant monster king of the village who stares at a helpless patrica and licks his lips and smiles at her... then he extends his tongue towards patrica as her head towards the carnivorous plants midget counterparts then the slobber of the carnivorous plants tongue drips on her right knee which makes her gasp and screams as the carnivorous plant quickly wrap his tongue around her waist and quickly closes his mouth on her head
sound of the carnivorous plant monster laughing and the midget carnivorous plant counterparts and the other alien carnivorous plant monsters were watching their king and cheering for him
Ow Ow Ow Ow Ow as patrica cries out then her scream became muffled as the alien carnivorous plant monster king took his first gulp she squirmed and struggled kicking her feet in thin air she punched and kicked madly as he took another gulp she wiggled her fingers and kicked her legs as she gets sucked inside the alien carnivorous plant monster kings mouth her muffle scream continues as her head goes deep inside the alien carnivorous plant monsters dark body She was kicking her legs too wildy that her right black style female sandal slipped out off her right foot and dropped on the floor. her white cascade blouse sort of rolled up a little bit as he takes another gulp The only thing that was left for the plant to swallow was Patrica's butt and legs. The alien carnivorous plant king swallowed again and May's legs continued to kick as she was being sucked in. It dind't take very long for the plant to swallow Patrica's butt and legs together as well as her black mini skirt she was wearing. And soon her wiggling toes dissapered into his mouth too.
Patrica was then completly devoured by the alien carnivorous plant monster kings as he makes a big gulp noise then he lets out a huge burp noise causing patrica's left black style high heel to come out of his mouth revealing what's left of patrica
the alien carnivorous plant monsters start cheering so does the midget alien carnivorous plant monsters
@%%@@%%##%%#%^#$%%^ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA said the alien carnivorous plant king that ate patrica since he's laughing because he thought her girly scream was very funny... the laughter of the alien carnivorous plant monsters echo
F I N
Meet Patrica Hardy a 21 year old atlanta georgia college girl who is driving back home to miami florida on vacation so that she can visit her mother and boyfriend... and she first got her driver's license when she was 19 ,
The Everglades
a ford escape is driving on the road and a kelly rowland song called work is being heard on there then it goes to the driver who is a female wearing a white cascade blouse and a black mini skirt and black style female sandals she is grooving to the music and copying off the lyrics that she can memorize then her mobile phone rings... patrica looks at the caller id and stops her car on the grass while she's talking
Baby what are you doing? Asks Patrica ,
The other person talking to patrica on the phone is her boyfriend shane
Seeing how far you are, replies Shane,
33 miles from miami, I'm at the everglades i stopped the car too because you know i can't talk to you on the phone and drive at the same time said Patrica , Shane replies Of course sorry about that babe I keep forgetting i love you
Patrica replies i love you too see you in miami
patrica hangs up her mobile phone and cranks her ford escape up and drives back on the road
MIAMI BEACH 2 HOURS LATER
despite it being cold elsewhere miami florida has a nice warm going to the beach day for others, like patrica and her boyfriend both aren't swimming but they are getting a sun tan patrica has her black bikini on and her boyfriend shane has his swimming trunks on...
Perfect weather don't you agree said Shane , Patrica replies hun after spending so much time in atlanta where it's freezing i agree...
MIAMI FLORIDA 3 HOURS LATER
patrica comes out of her mother's house
Wait patrica said's her mother, Patrica replies what is it?
You don't half to do that for me... said's patrica's mom But i do mom you need more organic foods look at all the stuff you got in there that isn't healthy.... Believe me mom you got less organic stuff in the house, I'll get you something healthy said Patrica
Her Mom replies okay if you say so
20 Minutes Later
as patrica was on her way back to her mom's house after buying organic foods and veggies her radio goes static
patrica taps the stereo then something catches her attention and it was an alien spacecraft
OH DEAR Patrica shouts out she desperately tries to kick the pedal to drive off fast but her ford escape started to break down since the alien spacecraft was causing that... then her ford escape wouldn't crank up then she desperately tries to run off but a beam of light from the alien spacecraft surrounds her
no no somebody please help me Patrica cries out
but nobody heard her and she was beamed on board the alien spacecraft as she screams
then the alien spacecraft rides off into outta space
SPACECRAFT INTERIOR
inside the spacecraft the aliens are revealed to be a alien carnivorous plant race who have a weird looking expression on their face which makes them look like they are smiling and their is a pod inside the pod is patrica being suspended in animation the pod she was in keeps her body and white cascade blouse and black mini skirt and footwear
THE PRESENT
the spacecraft makes it's way to it's home planet 100 light years from earth in the creetux star system the spacecraft lands on the alien carnivorous plant monsters home planet called planet nelex the pod carrying patrica opens up which patrica opens her eyes she looks around
an alien carnivorous plant notices patrica out of her pod and patrica gasps at the sight of the alien carnivorous plant monster but it looks harmless... and patrica quickly calms down
Gee i must've been out for a few hours said Patrica
however patrica think's she's only been away from earth for a few hours but she's unaware that she's been in suspended animation for a few months
the alien carnivorous plant speaks out in alien language @@!@#$$$@@!##$$%%@!!##@!
patrica responds in confusion I can't understand you
the alien carnivorous plant does a hand gesture to get patrica to follow him off the spacecraft
Oh i see you want me to follow you? Okay I can do that said Patrica
patrica follows the alien carnivorous plant off the spacecraft revealing that she's on another planet she gasps at the skyview where the night sky shows a distant planet and 2 moons
Wow patrica i don't think you're on earth Patrica said to herself...
patrica looks at her surroundings and it's a village with the alien carnivorous plant race that abducted her but she is still unaware of why she was abducted but looks around and sees that the village has tiki hut type houses.... It's like a star wars movie... patrica said to herself
Patrica asks in a nervous way, Okay you all seem pretty harmless, so how about you drop me off back on earth, Please....
patrica stare at the direction of the footsteps midget carnivorous plant monsters come running in towards patrica shouting out yak yak yak yak
Patrica gasps but smiles at the same time since she thinks the midget carnivorous plant monsters look so cute awwww look at this.... aren't you all so cute and cuddely wuddely yeah you little fellows look harmless the midget carnivorous plant respond with a yak yak yak noise then they jump and bounce up and down in front of patrica as she laughed nervously and replies Uhh how cute... then the midget carnivorous plant monsters start jumping and bouncing around in circles then as patrica almost loses her balance the midget carnivorous plant monsters surprisingly lift patrica up with their hands and carry her off despite being midgets.... Patrica Shouts oooh dear HELP MEEEEEEEE
they carry her to a big huge tiki arena suddenly the midget carnivorous plant monsters toss her to the floor
Patrica grunts ....
patrica looks at her surroundings and notices thorns and vineroots inside where she's at also a alien looking tree ... then looks back at the midget carnivorous plants who were still making a yak yak noise...
This is just too weird said patrica
then the alien looking tree turns out to be moving and it reveals to have a mouth and eyes which it's not an alien looking tree but a carnivorous plant monster king of the village who stares at a helpless patrica and licks his lips and smiles at her... then he extends his tongue towards patrica as her head towards the carnivorous plants midget counterparts then the slobber of the carnivorous plants tongue drips on her right knee which makes her gasp and screams as the carnivorous plant quickly wrap his tongue around her waist and quickly closes his mouth on her head
sound of the carnivorous plant monster laughing and the midget carnivorous plant counterparts and the other alien carnivorous plant monsters were watching their king and cheering for him
Ow Ow Ow Ow Ow as patrica cries out then her scream became muffled as the alien carnivorous plant monster king took his first gulp she squirmed and struggled kicking her feet in thin air she punched and kicked madly as he took another gulp she wiggled her fingers and kicked her legs as she gets sucked inside the alien carnivorous plant monster kings mouth her muffle scream continues as her head goes deep inside the alien carnivorous plant monsters dark body She was kicking her legs too wildy that her right black style female sandal slipped out off her right foot and dropped on the floor. her white cascade blouse sort of rolled up a little bit as he takes another gulp The only thing that was left for the plant to swallow was Patrica's butt and legs. The alien carnivorous plant king swallowed again and May's legs continued to kick as she was being sucked in. It dind't take very long for the plant to swallow Patrica's butt and legs together as well as her black mini skirt she was wearing. And soon her wiggling toes dissapered into his mouth too.
Patrica was then completly devoured by the alien carnivorous plant monster kings as he makes a big gulp noise then he lets out a huge burp noise causing patrica's left black style high heel to come out of his mouth revealing what's left of patrica
the alien carnivorous plant monsters start cheering so does the midget alien carnivorous plant monsters
@%%@@%%##%%#%^#$%%^ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA said the alien carnivorous plant king that ate patrica since he's laughing because he thought her girly scream was very funny... the laughter of the alien carnivorous plant monsters echo
F I N
