Post by blackvault on Jun 25, 2015 13:10:35 GMT -6
Yep finally here it is, the follow up to my latest christy ballaton story, christy is back again... and this time her quest takes her to china. she's been alliancing with a fictional chinese agency called Suziki Special Ops. flashbacks to before included within the story as well also includes narratting every time rights in her journal jerry rancho is back for the first time since the mid 2000s he was absent in the previous story but he's back,
The Cast
Christy Ballaton Rancho
Jerry Rancho
Qiu Swong
Chief Chung Wuu
Amanda Ballaton
Stewart Telbet
Lang Cho (Main Antagonist)
Chapter 1 : The Pursuit
Christy Narrating :search for my sister has lead me to hong kong china now... now recently after the discovery of being in a parallel universe and meeting my counterpart. who suprise... is the opposite of me but who i once was...
christy ballaton flashsback to seeing an evil counterpart of herself. who was almost killed by her sister amanda but christy stopped her.
Christy Narrating : now I'm framed for a murder i did not commit... which is why i also made my way to hong kong china,... but i barely escaped at the airport in florida. my airplane disapeared from their radar... luckily but that was because i got transfered to a parallel universe... i my husband and kids but more of that later... now hong kong china
Present
Hong Kong China
A Local Nightclub
a young female chinese girl is seen singing
christy ballaton is seen...
Christy : *sighs*
a chinese mob boss is walking towards christy with his 2 adult sons
Lang : *chinese accent* mrs rancho...
Christy : Lang.... i see you got the family with you this time...
Lang : *chinese accent* yes i do, so you got the medalion I'm sure of it
Christy : yes i do... as one of your boys there did tried to steal it from me last night without paying for it
christy stares at one of langs boys injured wrist
Lang : *chinese accent* you insult my son?
Christy : No you insulted me i spared him
the other one of langs boys yells out in chinese in anger
lang calms his oldest down
Lang : *chinese accent* well i suppose we should get to business...
Christy : that's the point to begin with...
christy puts the medalion on the table...
Lang : *chinese accent* your sister amanda is hidden within the shaun tang mountains.... at a isolated house... 52 miles to it from hong kong....
christy gives lang the medalion
lang smiles so does his 2 male boys
Lang : Hahahaha
Christy : since when you did have a sense of humor?
Lang : *chinese accent* since you drinked a tonic with poison...
christy calmy stares in shock and looks at that glass..
Lang : *chinese accent* and i got the anidote
christy attempts to grab the antidote but lang jerks it away
Lang : *chinese accent* no no mrs rancho you served your usefulness
the chinese female singer turns out to actually be a undercover chinese female friend of christy's and she points her machine gun at lang
Christy : give up the antidote
one of lang's men who had a gun hidden inside tries to shoot the chinese female friend but christy grabs a flaming chinese shsikabob steak and slains one of langs thugs with it killing him then shoots one of lang's young sons with a gun killing him too the chinese female friend of christys grabs one of lang's men by the wrist and snaps it making him drop the antidote
christy slides onto the floor and grabs it and takes it.
Qiu : *chinese accent* CHRISTY WATCH OUT
qiu shoots chinese thugs of lang's men that were trying to skewer christy with swords
Christy : LET'S SPLIT
qiu shoots more of lang's men then her and christy flees they get inside qiu's vehicle they drive off lang and his men give chase
christy is the passanger in the vehicle so she uses a assault rifle on lang's men chasing them one of the bullets hit one of langs men in the head killing him and wounded another lang is also giving pursuit in his vehicle he's in the backseat while his thugs are driving.
Lang : *shouts out in chinese*
Christy : WE GOT TO GET TO THE HIDE-OUT
one of lang's men crashes into a pole
Qiu : hang on....
qiu drives off a ramp onto an area outside of the amtrack station
christy and qiu looks around
Christy : Let's get those tickets
christy and qiu runs to the booth to get amtrack tickets to kiou hing mountains
Qiu : *chinese accent* we can't search for your sister just yet because that's what lang's men will expect because he might have more men over at shaun tang mountains
Christy : Yeah i see...
Qiu : *chinese accent* we'll get back to the hide-out and figure out our next move
christy and qiu gets inside the amtrack before lang and his men arrive which they do but they were too late because they were already on the amtrack and they left christy taunts lang with a saulte and qiu taunts him with a bow
lang stomps his foot in anger then he goes to the ticket booth
Lang : *chinese langauge*
Female Chinese Ticket Agent : *chinese laungauge*
the ticket agent refuses to give lang the location because it's against the law to reveal where the customers are heading to. then lang pulls out a gun on the ticket agent then 8 chinese rent a cop surround lang and his men and point assault rifles at them which lang and his men back off
Amtrack
Christy : Okay do any of your men have access to that chopper?
Qiu : *chinese accent* Yes plenty of my contacts do.
Christy : then we should get them to scount how many men are around the area my sister is said to be at
Chapter 2
jerry rancho and a fellow national guard friend stewart heads to china to search for christy, and to bring her back to face a fair trial despite her innocence
The Cast
Christy Ballaton Rancho
Jerry Rancho
Qiu Swong
Chief Chung Wuu
Amanda Ballaton
Stewart Telbet
Lang Cho (Main Antagonist)
Chapter 1 : The Pursuit
Christy Narrating :search for my sister has lead me to hong kong china now... now recently after the discovery of being in a parallel universe and meeting my counterpart. who suprise... is the opposite of me but who i once was...
christy ballaton flashsback to seeing an evil counterpart of herself. who was almost killed by her sister amanda but christy stopped her.
Christy Narrating : now I'm framed for a murder i did not commit... which is why i also made my way to hong kong china,... but i barely escaped at the airport in florida. my airplane disapeared from their radar... luckily but that was because i got transfered to a parallel universe... i my husband and kids but more of that later... now hong kong china
Present
Hong Kong China
A Local Nightclub
a young female chinese girl is seen singing
christy ballaton is seen...
Christy : *sighs*
a chinese mob boss is walking towards christy with his 2 adult sons
Lang : *chinese accent* mrs rancho...
Christy : Lang.... i see you got the family with you this time...
Lang : *chinese accent* yes i do, so you got the medalion I'm sure of it
Christy : yes i do... as one of your boys there did tried to steal it from me last night without paying for it
christy stares at one of langs boys injured wrist
Lang : *chinese accent* you insult my son?
Christy : No you insulted me i spared him
the other one of langs boys yells out in chinese in anger
lang calms his oldest down
Lang : *chinese accent* well i suppose we should get to business...
Christy : that's the point to begin with...
christy puts the medalion on the table...
Lang : *chinese accent* your sister amanda is hidden within the shaun tang mountains.... at a isolated house... 52 miles to it from hong kong....
christy gives lang the medalion
lang smiles so does his 2 male boys
Lang : Hahahaha
Christy : since when you did have a sense of humor?
Lang : *chinese accent* since you drinked a tonic with poison...
christy calmy stares in shock and looks at that glass..
Lang : *chinese accent* and i got the anidote
christy attempts to grab the antidote but lang jerks it away
Lang : *chinese accent* no no mrs rancho you served your usefulness
the chinese female singer turns out to actually be a undercover chinese female friend of christy's and she points her machine gun at lang
Christy : give up the antidote
one of lang's men who had a gun hidden inside tries to shoot the chinese female friend but christy grabs a flaming chinese shsikabob steak and slains one of langs thugs with it killing him then shoots one of lang's young sons with a gun killing him too the chinese female friend of christys grabs one of lang's men by the wrist and snaps it making him drop the antidote
christy slides onto the floor and grabs it and takes it.
Qiu : *chinese accent* CHRISTY WATCH OUT
qiu shoots chinese thugs of lang's men that were trying to skewer christy with swords
Christy : LET'S SPLIT
qiu shoots more of lang's men then her and christy flees they get inside qiu's vehicle they drive off lang and his men give chase
christy is the passanger in the vehicle so she uses a assault rifle on lang's men chasing them one of the bullets hit one of langs men in the head killing him and wounded another lang is also giving pursuit in his vehicle he's in the backseat while his thugs are driving.
Lang : *shouts out in chinese*
Christy : WE GOT TO GET TO THE HIDE-OUT
one of lang's men crashes into a pole
Qiu : hang on....
qiu drives off a ramp onto an area outside of the amtrack station
christy and qiu looks around
Christy : Let's get those tickets
christy and qiu runs to the booth to get amtrack tickets to kiou hing mountains
Qiu : *chinese accent* we can't search for your sister just yet because that's what lang's men will expect because he might have more men over at shaun tang mountains
Christy : Yeah i see...
Qiu : *chinese accent* we'll get back to the hide-out and figure out our next move
christy and qiu gets inside the amtrack before lang and his men arrive which they do but they were too late because they were already on the amtrack and they left christy taunts lang with a saulte and qiu taunts him with a bow
lang stomps his foot in anger then he goes to the ticket booth
Lang : *chinese langauge*
Female Chinese Ticket Agent : *chinese laungauge*
the ticket agent refuses to give lang the location because it's against the law to reveal where the customers are heading to. then lang pulls out a gun on the ticket agent then 8 chinese rent a cop surround lang and his men and point assault rifles at them which lang and his men back off
Amtrack
Christy : Okay do any of your men have access to that chopper?
Qiu : *chinese accent* Yes plenty of my contacts do.
Christy : then we should get them to scount how many men are around the area my sister is said to be at
Chapter 2
jerry rancho and a fellow national guard friend stewart heads to china to search for christy, and to bring her back to face a fair trial despite her innocence
chapter 4 is another flashback chapter where christy meets her earth c counterpart and recruits her