Christy Ballaton

I've seen that movie and the directors cut version

It was because this guy i know around the block moved here early last year and i found out over the summer that he has a long history of celiac disease so i decided to add that in the storyline that christy gets diagnosed with it

very exciting chapter!! I liked how the cop was gonna make the guy say the alphabet backwards. i can't do that drunk or not

Well the first cameo as I mentioned cameos appears in this chapter and for chapter 8 too

Chapter 7 The Goldweather Investment Party

Starring Christy Ballaton Rancho (Lead Female Protagonist)
Jack Brikers (Male Protagonist)
Riley Franks
Dan Norton
Leonard Crest
Daryl Weston (Secondary Antagonist)
Larry Ballaton
Bethany Hines Ballaton
Katrina Smith Brikers
Marty Weston (Main Antagonist)

Guest Starring Stephen Sadler
Lea Burgess
Officer Lyle Vanski (Primary Antagonist)
Officer Danny Turner (Primary Antagonist)
Special Guest Star Tim Falay

Dade County Correctional Institute

prisoners were chattering and some were having loved ones visiting them a man comes in wearing a suit and tie comes towards a black female prisoner revealing to be lea burgess who's face is bruised from the cop beating her up

Stephen : Lea it's Whaaat? Lea who did this to you?

Lea : it's nothing.. ummm

Stephen : No it's something who did this?

Lea : one of the cops that killed adam and arrested me.

stephen sighs

Stephen : I'm so sorry about adam,

Lea : My husband is gone the father of my 2 kids. they arrested me and i didn't do anything wrong, the jury pleaded me guilty they wouldn't let me call you to represent me, i Got to call my husbands family.

Stephen : we'll get to that but You got a case.. there's no excuse for what those cops did to you, I will make sure they lose their badge, were going to get you out I'm also gonna look in on what went on and demand a investigation of them stopping you and your husband,

Lea : They shot him over trying to reach for his mobile phone, It was just a mobile phone

Stephen : we'll take them to court and get you out, I'm not abandending you just because of your husband being shot and killed by the police you both were my clients, We'll get you through this

Daryl Westons Mansion

a investment party is being hosted

Marty : Ladies and gentlemen thank you all for showing up, today but thank my son he's the one who's idea is to host the party at his mansion, You're all great friends and have worked with me for awhile now, today I invested more shares in goldweather and as that I hearby made plans to give the original 11% over to my son as i become it's main shareholder...

the crowd cheers

Marty : goldweather has expanded into miami but that's not all, that's right that's not all, we are looking into other cities in florida to expand more expanding means better fight against crime the cities were looking in to expanding are fort lauderdale florida sarasota florida gainesville florida tallahassee florida our goal is to make goldweather bigger and more presence then the fbi and cia combined, Thank you ladies and gentlemen

people cheer

Daryl : lovely speech dad

Marty : Thank you son so how's your nose?

Daryl : still in a little bit bad shape, amanda's husband did this, I'll get that son of a bitch back for this. Dad how about we send some goldweather mercenaries to teach him a lesson for it,

Marty : No we got other stuff to deal with,

Daryl : Then I'll kill amanda's husband myself

Marty : No i need you because you know despite what you said to ballaton on the phone the other day she's not going to give up. I know her

Daryl : You're right about that, Okay then we'll focus on dealing with christy.

Marty : Good then if any other unsolved tie comes in then we'll take them out.

chief riley franks shows up and walks towards marty and daryl

Riley : Hey there's my 2 friends. congralation you 2 did a sucessful job

Marty : We do what we can for the company.

Riley : Got any drinks?

Daryl : Over there

Riley : Hahahaha the best rich family ever. you got my support.

Daryl : we know that because i got released from the slammer hahahaha

Riley : You just can't jail the important it is wrong oh wrong.

Christy Ballaton's Mansion

christy gets out of her white ferrari and goes inside with her 5 children who she picked up from her father and step mothers house.

Christy : Did any of you have a good day at school?

Lila : pretty cool better then it has been,

Christy : That's great to hear.

christy's youngest son marshall shows christy a picture he did

Christy : Awww that looks so cute, you did this? good work you're getting good

Jerry Jr : Yeah he is,

christy sees james jr

Christy : Hey james how was school?

james ignores her and tries to walk off

Christy : James hey james

James Jr : WHAT

Christy : You don't half to yell at me.

James Jr : Oh then how should i respond?

Christy : More respectful like

James Jr : whatever talking to you is like talking to a inmate

Christy : Hey you may hate me but you will respect me when you're a member of this household do you understand me?

James Jr : Leave me alone

james jr runs upstairs

Christy : JAMES, JAMES *sigh*

Lila : i don't understand and grandpa told him to go easy on you and he said yes so much for that then.

christy's mobile phone rings and she answers it

Christy : What

Leonard On Phone : nice to hear from you too

Christy : Sorry leonard i just had a fight with one of my kids,

Leonard On Phone : Oh that's alright

Christy : So what did you got?

Leonard On Phone : it's all set i talked to johnny t he's gonna meet you at a apartment building, but first come by here there's something i got to tell you.

Christy : Okay you sound like it's urgent

Leonard On Phone : it is

leonard hangs up the mobile phone

Christy : Dammit

christy gets in contact with katrina jack brikers wife. on her mobile phone

Christy : Hey katrina it's me I'm sorry for asking you to do this but can you watch the kids for me i just got a urgent call, Yeah something like that, you can? Thank you I'll pay you also thanks okay bye.

christy hangs up her mobile phone

Christy : Listen i just got a call, I got run out, katrina is gonna watch out for all of you.

Undisclosed Location

sound of a man screaming after being hit with a crowbar on the arm

the man being tortured is a mexican american civilian who is being accused of something and the person with the crowbar is tim falay who is wearing a black suit and tie

Tim : I'm not gonna ask you again what are they planning how are they doing this so quickly?

Male Mexican American 1 : *groans* I I don't know, I'm telling you i have nothing to do with them, Please believe me

tim stares at the other man in the suit and ties and they nod their heads back and fourth while rolling their eyes since they don't believe the mexican american male then tim looks back at the mexican american male revealing his last name

Tim : we can do this all day mr diaz

On chapter 8 christy and leonard discuss some things and finds out someone in the crimes unit has been working with leonard too and she meets with johnny t and goldweather ambushes them

Chapter 9 The Investigation

Starring Christy Ballaton Rancho (Lead Female Protagonist)
Jack Brikers (Male Protagonist)
Riley Franks
Dan Norton
Leonard Crest
Daryl Weston (Secondary Antagonist)
Larry Ballaton
Bethany Hines Ballaton
Katrina Smith Brikers
Marty Weston (Main Antagonist)

Guest Starring Stephen Sadler
Lea Burgess
Officer Lyle Vanski (Primary Antagonist)
Officer Danny Turner (Primary Antagonist)
Detective Ted Foyler


Miami Crimes Unit Headquarters

christy loads more bullets in her gun

jack brikers takes a few steps towards her

Jack : Hi

Christy : Hi

Jack : Are you okay?

Christy : Fine why?

Jack : my wife had to babysit your kids out of the blue, and believe me i know you're ain't okay

Christy : Well i got celiac disease if that's any response to what you're saying,

Jack : i know that but I'm talking about you're feelings,

Christy : That son of a bitch killed my sister and got away with it.... There i just said my feelings happy?

Jack : I'm sorry *sigh*

commander dan norton comes out of his office to whistle for christy

Dan : christy get in my office please, I got somebody i like for you to meet

Christy : Excuse me jack

christy walks inside commander dan nortons office and sees stephen sadler

Dan : christy this is stephen sadler from the law offices of sadler and co

Stephen : How do you do ma'm

stephen and christy shake hands

Christy : Nice to meet you. So what's going on?

Dan : stephen needs your help on a problem, he doesn't trust anyone from the police department to do this, so he wants us to look in on one of his clients being gunned down by 2 cops

Christy : Who are these cops?

Stephen : officer lyle vanski and officer danny turner they stopped my client adam burgess on a driving while drunk charge my client's wife said they were telling him to do a drunken test but he refused because he was not drunk, and he threatened to call me because they were harrassing him and making a fake charge so when he reached in his pocket for his phone they warned him to keep his hands outta his pocket but he told him he's going to use his phone but they did not listen and so when he went to reach his mobile phone from his pocket they opened fire on him all at once his wife was devastated by it then officer lyle vanski arrested her then beated her up and the jury quickly pleaded her guilty they refuse to let her call me, please look in on what went on,

Christy : Of course I'll do that mr sadler, I don't approve a man beating a lady even when it's somebody who wears a badge it makes them cowards when they do that

Stephen : That's right. and can you visit my client too and talk to her? well I'll come with you and do that

Christy : Yes sir,

Stephen : Thank you mrs rancho i knew i can count on you my friend dan said you're one of the best.

Miami Police Department

Christy : where's chief franks again?

Male Detective : He's at a conference, is there something you need?

Christy : well detective foyler a favor, please look in on why the 2 cops officer lyle vanski and officer danny turner shot adam burgess, we at the crimes unit are already started a investigation in it but we want you to corperate too

Ted : I'll do what i can but my opinion officer lyles actions are justified

Christy : Just for reaching for his mobile phone?

Ted : Well he was warned to keep his hands outta his pocket.

Christy : that is such a lame justified reason detective, and you think it was justified that he beat his widow?

Ted : ...

Christy : That's what i want. Dammit detective were asking for your coperation you may defend dirty cops like vanski but his wife is standing there behind bars for something she didn't do she needs justice,

officer lyle is see overhearing the conversation

Ted : Okay we'll look in on it with you

Christy : Thank you.

christy walks out of detective ted foylers office then she sees officer lyle vanski who is smiling sinisterly at christy

Lyle : you will lose this round christy.

Christy : Piss off

Lyle : I don't know what you think you gain i been with the force for 8 years the entire police force is on my side they know I'm a good cop i never been suspended or been put behind bars, but you know who needs to be... You christy, you're the one with the criminal history.

Christy : Your point?

Lyle : we all know your background it may be mostly forgotten but one slip from you will make your past bite you in the ass. so do your investigation but it won't change their opinion in here about me. so mind your own business

Christy : You give new meaning to the term snake

chrisy walks off

Danny : What was that all about?

Lyle : just somebody from the crimes unit who think's she's all that.

Dade County Correctional Institute

Stephen : Lea i want you to meet you somebody from the crimes unit,

Lea : *gasps*

Stephen : It's okay you can trust her.

Lea : Her?

christy walks in

Stephen : This is detective christy rancho, i told her and the crimes unit to investigate those 2 cops gunning down your husband.

Christy : Nice to meet you ma'm sorry about your husband

Lea : Thank you..

Stephen : You 2 got alot in common her sister was recently killed and your husband was recently killed.

Lea : I'm very sorry about that.

Christy : Thank you. Lea we are going to get you out, and investigate lyle vanski and danny turner,

Stephen : We got a court hearing coming up i just convinced simmons to do this. were going to sue them.

On chapter 10 commander norton assigns christy to rescue lector diaz from the IAA and chief riley franks threatens to suspend commander norton after finding out about the attack on goldweather.

4 more chapters left of the story yall

Thank you mh here's the next chapter and another tim falay cameo

Chapter 10 Vs The IAA

Starring Christy Ballaton Rancho (Lead Female Protagonist)
Jack Brikers (Male Protagonist)
Riley Franks
Dan Norton
Leonard Crest
Daryl Weston (Secondary Antagonist)
Larry Ballaton
Bethany Hines Ballaton
Katrina Smith Brikers
Marty Weston (Main Antagonist)

Guest Starring Lector Diaz

Cameo Guest Stars
Tim Falay
Jeffery Batt

The Everglades

christy comes walking into leonards room

Leonard : Hey just in time

Dan : The chopper is all set.

Leonard : Yep and i got a close friend who's from the gun club that will be on the building opposite from the IAA building he's a sniper specialist

Christy : good we need all the help we can get so what do we know about this guy were rescuing?

Leonard : He's a employee at sears,

Christy : You're joking right?

Dan : basically no he's been working at sears for 4 years now, We must get him from the IAA

Christy : Let's roll then

Above Miami

A Chopper

Dan : theirs the building you got that suit too so use the rope

Christy : Hey i notice it's a more feminine version of the black suit (I can't remember the name of the suit yall)

christy uses the rope to shimmy and attach herself on the building to pull herself down a few windows till she gets to the one where their torturing lector diaz

Lector : *grunts* *whimpers*

tim falay uses a flashlight and hits lector in the arm with it while other IAA man hold his arm so that he can do that.

Tim : How does that make you feel?

Lector : Ugh it it hurts.

Tim : Well you better start talking otherwise I'll shove this flashlight so hard in your face you're own family won't even recognize you.... You think we can't do that? It's in our guidelines, Now HOW MUCH MEN ARE THEY SENDING TO THE USA?

Lector : ugh i i don't know I was just a person they invite because my fellow employee worked with them, ugh

Tim : Same story blah blah blah hold him

Lector : NO NO PLEASE

christy kicks in the glass

Christy : Suprise you corrupt shits

Tim : WHO THE FUCK IS THAT?

Male IAA Man 1 : INTRUDER

Tim : KEEP HER BUSY WHILE I SOUND THE ALARM FOR THE ATTACK CHOPPERS

tim falay runs off to call for back-up

christy starts shooting at the IAA members who are trying to kill her

Lector : huh who are you?

Christy : I'LL EXPLAIN LATER UM MR MYSTERIOUS DUDE YOU'RE ON THE BUILDING CORRECT?

the sniper specialist is revealed to be jeffery batt

Jeffery : Oh Yeah i got your back

jeffery batt shoots the other IAA members 5 of the rest

Jeffery : You're clear now

Christy : Good job

christy gets back into the chopper

Jeffery On Radio : We got company, they brough in the attack choppers one of them is heading my way but I'll fix him good

jeffery batt shoots the attack chopper pilot in the head causing the attack chopper to spin outta control and crash into the water

Jeffery On Radio : all clear on my side but their tailing for you guys now

Dan : good job you just get off there before anymore suprises from them come your way

Jeffery On Radio : I'm on it

Christy : thanks for your help

Dan : christy see if you can take these bastards out

Christy : We got to lure them over the water to prevent any civilians from getting hurt

Dan : That is the plan

IAA Man On Intercom : YOU ARE A THREAT TO NATIONAL SECURITY INCLUDING THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA SURRENDER OR WE WILL WASTE YOUR CHOPPER INTO KINGDOM COME ,

Christy : These guys need to take anger mangement

the attack choppers begin open firing on dan nortons private chopper while christy uses her smg to shoot at them then they fly over the water

Christy : Okay let's take them out

christy shoots the attack choppers of the IAA'S and they crash killing the IAA members

Dan : Well done

Christy : Thanks

Lector : Okay who who are you guys?

Christy : you can say were like super cops erm no super agents

Lector : Thank you thank you for rescuing me those people their you wouldn't believe what they did to me, They think I'm a terriost working for goldweather It was horrible I'm an american ciziten i don't do terriost acts,

Christy : I know but i doubt they would care, but you're safe now.

Lector : thank you again

Dan : were going to get you at a safehouse my agents will ask you questions, you're responses will help us bring goldweather down for good or prevent them from operating on US soil ever again.

On chapter 11 dan norton tells christy to meet him at the courtyard chief riley franks threatens to arrest them both then a showdown blood bath takes place on there.