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mh God "drop trow, and i'll take you to budepest!" Posts: 4,390	Christy Ballaton Dec 19, 2013 21:53:09 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mh on Dec 19, 2013 21:53:09 GMT -6 whooo!! potty talk. good story though. lots of action in this one. christy took down a helicopter! and she shops organic. who knew ? very enjoyable jesse, keep them coming

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Christy Ballaton Jan 24, 2014 3:53:00 GMT -6 mh likes this

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Well too busy to start the final 2 christy ballaton chapters of this installment, Been so wrapped up on another story i been doing and plan to share that one on here and get around of doing the last 2 christy ballaton chapters of this installment

mh God "drop trow, and i'll take you to budepest!" Posts: 4,390	Christy Ballaton Jan 25, 2014 0:12:08 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mh on Jan 25, 2014 0:12:08 GMT -6 well, it would be nice if you posted it here too. 'cause if people don't get enough christy ballaton, they start freaking out
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Sorry for the long wait but here's another chapter

also I've extended the chapters till chapter 15

Chapter 12 The Fundraiser

Starring Christy Ballaton Rancho (Lead Female Protagonist)
Jack Brikers (Male Protagonist)
Riley Franks
Dan Norton
Leonard Crest
Daryl Weston (Secondary Antagonist)
Larry Ballaton
Bethany Hines Ballaton
Katrina Smith Brikers
Marty Weston (Main Antagonist)

Guest Starring Stephen Sadler
Lea Burgess
Officer Lyle Vanski (Primary Antagonist)
Detective Ted Foyler

Dan's Apartment

dan is smoking a cigerette then puts it out when he hears a knock on his door.

Dan : Hold on

dan gets to the door opening it and it's christy

Christy : Okay talk what do ya got?

Dan : Okay... listen their are a few things i found out, you know that girl lea burgess she's in danger,

Christy : What do ya mean?

Dan : according to my contact from the prison he was involved in it too but they threatened to kill his wife and kids and make it look like a robbery if he didn't go through with this. So he met with me and he double checked and he wasn't followed... lyle vanski and riley franks are both plotting to have lea burgess murdered in prison by other prisoners...

Christy : Dammit.. I fucking knew it, We can't sit by and do nothing...

Dan : I already have that taken care of...

Christy : What without me?

Dan : You got other problems to deal with, we can't have you go around there they will know their cover is blown if they saw you there, Agent jack brikers and a few of our men are arranging to prevent her being killed...

Christy : Then you'll arrest lyle and riley?

Dan : *sigh*

Christy : Theirs a catch isn't there?

Dan : yes even if they do get arrested it wouldn't be a 25 year prison sentence for them... You know how it works we don't make the rules on that you know...

Christy : It's not right... Okay I'll let jack brikers handle it.. but you have something else to tell me?

Dan : Yes, it seems goldweather has made some discovery now what I'm about to show ya should be only for our department's eyes,

dan shows a picture of marty and a unknown female wearing a mask and latex suit... and a crystal cube...

Christy : The fuck is this?

Dan : the cube or the woman?

Christy : The cube...

Dan : we don't know, but goldweather has had it in their possession for awhile ever since they got to miami, as for the woman who knows maybe she's a mistress or a girlfriend of hers I dunno.

christy is puzzled by the cube's look

Christy : So what do ya think we should do about this cube?

Dan : I know we let them have it,

Christy : Okay...

Dade County Correctional Institute

lea burgess is seen on the phone talking to her mother..

Lea : Yeah the food here is just crap,so what's going on over there? yeah tell everyone i said Hi I'm trying too

a prison guard is shown walking out and lea stares confused at why he would just walk out since he's suppose to give prisoners on the phone supervision then 2 prisoners walk in then as they jerk the phone from her jack brikers quickly runs in and grabs the prisoners arm and gets the knife from him

Jack : Alright shows over with,

Lea : What what just went on?

Jack : These man were going to kill you, we knew about it,

Lea : i'm thank you thank you very much... but even if you locked them up they will still try again.

Stephen : No they won't, you're released.

jack brikers handcuffs the 2 prisoners...

Jack : Get these pricks out of my sight. and see if you can get anything out of them.

Crimes Unit Agent : Yes sir.

Jack : I'm sure now riley franks and lyle will realize their plan failed...

Lea : Thank you both, and Christy too,

Jack : So what are you going to do now?

Lea : make plans to move back close to my mothers, i was on the phone with her, she's trying to get me to do that. but I'll take up her offer after this...

Later on

Fundraiser

civilians were chattering and christy is dressed in a cocktail dress with jack brikers

Jack : Our mission is success.

Christy : So she's okay?

Jack : Yeah we got her at a safehouse for right now though until we stop them then she said's she's going to move back close to her family.. Hey I'm getting inside you wanna come in?

Christy : I'll tag along later...

Jack : Okay

jack brikers walks inside

christy texts her father larry then daryl weston appears behind her.

Daryl : Christy what a lovely suprise..

Christy : What the fuck do you want?

Daryl : Oh nothing I'm just joining a pleasant fundraiser of good charity, wow look at all these people the slums residents will be happy for sure... I managed to arrive at this lovely party unlike your father and stepmother and kids.. hahahaha

daryl weston walks off

Christy : YOU DUMB FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU..

christy quickly gets in her white ferrari and drives off fast then she tries to call her own house but nobody answers

Christy : Come on come on pick up, DAMMIT

christy's mobile phone rings and it was daryl weston

christy answers.

Daryl On Speaker : Now you got to rescue your father and whore stepmother and kids before my men kill them, think you can do it?

Christy : When i do that I'm coming after you and your lawyers won't stop me.

daryl hangs up the mobile phone.

and christy finally arrives at her mansion and draws out her gun and see's a cop car there too

Bethany : GET OFF ME,

goldweather mercenaries tries to choke bethany but she digs her nails into his eye

Goldweather Mercenary 1 : AHHH YOU FUCKING BITCH

the goldweather mercenary punches bethany out unconcious then christy gets inside and shoots 5 rounds into the goldweather mercenary thug killing him instantly

Goldweather Mercenary 2 : It's Ballaton she's here. don't let her on the steps.

christy checks on bethany... who is knocked out cold

another goldweather thug runs after christy

Goldweather Mercenary 3 : YOU'RE NEXT BITCH

christy rolls out of the way and shoots 2 rounds into the goldweather mercenary killing him

Christy : DAD

Larry : CHRISTY

Christy : WHERE ARE YOU?

Larry : NEVERMIND THAT GET THE KIDS THEY HAVE THEM IN THE ROOM BE CAREFUL

Goldweather Mercenary 2 : BALLATON IF YOU CAN HEAR ME, COME INSIDE AND I WILL KILL YOUR BRATS...

Christy : LEAVE THEM ALONE THEY GOT NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS.

Goldweather Mercenary 2 : YOU SHOULD'VE THOUGHT ABOUT THAT BEFORE YOU FUCKED WITH OUR OPERATIONS,

larry ballaton is seen putting the ropes he tied on with a candle and he manages to get it burnt so that he can get free

Christy : *sniff* *sniff* The fuck?

Goldweather Mercenary 2 : what is that smell? BALLATON WHAT ARE YOU UP TO? I'll check it out

the goldweather mercenary thug opens the door and christy shoots a round in his head killing him then she ducks and shoots the other goldweather mercenary thug 5 times killing him instantly

Christy : *sigh* James jerry lila are you all okay?

they all hug christy fast.

Jerry Jr : were fine, but mom you look like you were panting.

Christy : yeah because i was worried they were going to hurt you,

James Jr : Mom thank you..

Lila : by the way what's that smell from before?

Larry : That was me.

Christy : So you handled yourself well if you managed to get free.

Larry : long story, where's bethany?

Christy : She's out cold but she will be fine, she will have a nasty bruise on her head though.

Larry : Damn piece of shits, theirs something else you got to know, a cop was here and he threatened us and threatened to make a false arrest if i tried to save the grandkids.

Christy : Vanski that son of a bitch then that cop car...

sound of a car driving off

christy looks out the window and sees officer lyle vanski driving off,

Christy : I'll get him eventually...

Larry : I'll call the amublence.

Christy : Good you do that I want you and the kids to stay at a motel or something it's not safe for them to be at the mansion...

Larry : Okay we'll do that but I'm a grown man I've dealt with thugs like this before you know that.

Christy : But these are trained professional killers. please dad.

Larry : Alright alright.

on chapter 13 christy and officer lyle vanski gets into a nasty fight and christy finds out what she needs to know about the cube, meanwhile the masked woman from picture contacts christy and warns her to not dig deep into stuff that she should not known,

mh God "drop trow, and i'll take you to budepest!" Posts: 4,390	Christy Ballaton Mar 13, 2014 13:33:17 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mh on Mar 13, 2014 13:33:17 GMT -6 dang!! Christy has a potty mouth on her. but I loved the stery! don't wait so long next time! and dan should be going outside when he wants to smoke, unless he's in friggin kentucky
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Time for another chapter now only 3 more left

Chapter 13 Beat the Beaters

Starring Christy Ballaton Rancho (Lead Female Protagonist)
Jack Brikers (Male Protagonist)
Riley Franks
Dan Norton
Leonard Crest
Daryl Weston (Secondary Antagonist)
Larry Ballaton
Bethany Hines Ballaton
Katrina Smith Brikers
Marty Weston (Main Antagonist)

Guest Starring Stephen Sadler
Lea Burgess
Officer Lyle Vanski (Primary Antagonist)
Detective Ted Foyler
Poplo

christy ballaton is sitting on a bench talking on her mobile phone to leonard crest with a pink evening dress and black fishnet stockings and black high heel shoes

Christy : They came after my kids and father leonard.

Leonard On Phone : Does mean you want to get out of the job?

Christy : No they made this more personal... Vanski was there too

Leonard On Phone : The one who beat that woman?

Christy : Yes he's been in league with goldweather the cowardly son of a bitch fled once i killed the goldweather pricks at the mansion... I'm going after him, I'll make him pay dearly for this. seeya later

christy hangs up her mobile phone

a cuban guy who's wearing a old timey 1930's detective hat and a black jacket and black jeans

Christy : Poplo there you are

Poplo : Man every time i see you wearing high heels or high heel pointy shoes it reminds me of this american girl in palm beach, man she was hot.

Christy : So where can i find officer vanski?

Poplo : Ah yeah word on the street you have it in for him

Christy : word gets around fast...

Poplo : you sure you want to know where he's at?

Christy : Yes i do...

Poplo : i mean if you go after him theirs a good chance you could get a 25 year prison sentence...

Christy : Never said i was going to kill him

Poplo : Then what are you going to do?

Christy : Teach him that just because he hides behind a badge that don't mean the law don't apply to him too. Look i don't feel like explaining why I'm doing this

Poplo : well i'm sure you got your reasons never trusted him anyway. okay a few blocks away you'll find the porterview suburds 5th house on the left.

Christy : thank you.

christy walks off

Poplo : good luck.

christy gets back to her white ferrari and gets out a gadget so she can wear it and record the sound of her fighting officer vanski she takes the black pointy high heel shoe off her left foot and tapes the gadget to the sole of her foot. and puts her black pointy high heel shoe back on her left foot and cranks up her white ferrari

Miami Crimes Unit Headquarters

dan norton is in his office talking on the phone

Dan : are you sure? That can't be. you better not have been drinking while you're on duty... I see. i believe you then now with this cube, you know what means goldweather has broken the laws of physics. great now i'm starting to sound crazy *sighs* I know but still She's off for today but I'll still give her the message later on. okay keep in touch bye

jack brikers is also in his office.

Jack : was that your contact?

Dan : Yeah he found out something about that cube. but how did goldweather managed to create something like this?

Jack : But what's the cube do?

Dan : it makes history it's intention to travel to alternate universes.........

jack brikers jaw drops

Jack : you're kidding?

Dan : No goldweather created this their using it to go to alternate earths to kill alternate versions of christy ballaton the cube is in it's prototype stage and that was a success.

Jack : if the christy we know can handle dozens of goons then maybe other christy ballaton from parallel universes can.

Dan : some of them might and some of them might not, but still we got to do something about this.

Jack : What about the masked gimp woman?

Dan : he can't nothing out of marty of who she is...

Porterview Suburds

christy ballaton parks her white ferrari close to officer vanski's home christy sticks her gun in her purse just in case she has to use it after all.

christy sees officer vanski kissing a lady possibly his wife or girlfriend. then she leaves so christy sneaks in his yard as he closes the door and just before he tries to christy points her gun at his head.

Christy : try anything and I'll blow your fucking head off get inside the house...

christy shuts the door with her foot

Lyle : You just crossed a line ballaton, congralations do enjoy your prison time.

Christy : Not when they hear about your shady dealings with goldweather and beating up a defenseless woman. and going after my family, the worse number 1 mistake you made.

Lyle : hahaha your deluded

Christy : we'll see about that

Lyle : How about NOW

lyle rolls on the floor and knocks the gun from christy's hand then tries to grab christy but christy breaks his grip so fast and they struggle onto the sofa and floor christy punches officer lyle vanski 3 times in the nose

Lyle : *grunt* *grunt* *grunt*

officer lyle vanski reaches for his taser to try to use it on christy but christy grabs his arm

Lyle : *grunt* I'm gonna kill you for this...

christy manages to send the taser back at officer lyle vanski which goes off stunning him

Lyle : *screams like a sissy*

christy tosses the taser from him

Lyle : *moans* I swear I'll kill you for this ballaton, you will suffer for laying a hand on a police officer.

Christy : GET UP

Lyle : *moans* you bitch how can i when you tased me?

Christy : tough I'm sure you tell people you've arrested to get up when they can't due to being phased because you tased them.

Lyle : *moans* fuck you whore

christy kicks officer lyle vanski in the ribs 6 times

Lyle : *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* *grunt

Christy : Don't you ever go after my family again you son of a bitch

then the voltage wears off of officer lyle vanski who is still weak from being beaten by christy

Christy : Whats the matter vanski you thought all women were helpless and defenseless like lea burgess?

Lyle : Fuck you whore fuck you.. I don't regret beating that bitch she should've respected the badge... *coughs up blood* it's your own fault that your family got mixed up if you just left goldweather alone we wouldn't had to put them in danger. and i don't regret that either... anyone with the last name ballaton or rancho should be put in the ground.

officer lyle vanski grabs a piece of sharp glass to try to stab christy with it but christy has such good reflex she does a jump kick at officer lyle vanski sending him flying against the carpet christy grabs officer lyle vanski and punches him 6 times

Lyle : *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* *grunt* *grunt*

officer lyle vanski's nose is bleeding and it's broken then she grabs a badly beaten officer lyle vanski and opens a window and slams it shut on officer lyle vanski's fingers sound of bones crunching

Lyle : AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Christy : Doesn't feel good does it?

Lyle : *whimpers* *moans*

Christy : killing you won't bring lea's husband back i know and it won't bring back my sister, so instead of killing you you'll be soaked into your cowardness and besides i already got your confession

christy takes off her black pointy high heel shoe off her left foot and takes off the gadget and shows it to officer lyle vanski

officer lyle vanski sees it but he doesn't say anything due to still whimpering christy puts her black pointy high heel shoe back on her left foot and walks out the door

then suddenly she recieves a text message from another woman it reads

Too Christy Ballaton Rancho for your own good i suggest you do not dig deep into stuff you should not know because of the response of it can be difficult to you....

Sign The Masked Woman

Christy : what?

christy's mobile phone rings and it's dan norton so she's answers it

Christy : Sup boss?

Dan On Phone : We got what we need. One of my insiders at goldweather revealed what we need to know so come by the station were taking them down.

Christy : Okay I'm on my way and it's about time too

On chapter 14 with 2 more chapters left of the story christy finds out from goldweather that they plan to go to alternate universes to other earths and kill alternate versions of christy and goldweather has 10 hostages locked away. christy could very well be close to a showdown with the ones who killed his sister the final battle against goldweather will start but what did the masked woman meant about the response will be difficult for her? the answer soon

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mh God "drop trow, and i'll take you to budepest!" Posts: 4,390	Christy Ballaton Apr 17, 2014 20:21:24 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mh on Apr 17, 2014 20:21:24 GMT -6 that was another good one!!! i wish we didn't have to wait 3 months for each installment. the twilight movies came out faster

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Oh don't worry i got free time to do the final few chapters

Chapter 14 In Position

Starring Christy Ballaton Rancho (Lead Female Protagonist)
Jack Brikers (Male Protagonist)
Riley Franks
Dan Norton
Leonard Crest
Daryl Weston (Secondary Antagonist)
Larry Ballaton
Bethany Hines Ballaton
Katrina Smith Brikers
Marty Weston (Main Antagonist)

Miami Crimes Unit Headquarters

Christy : You had somebody go under cover at goldweather?

Dan : Yes i did

Christy : when was this? You didn't tell me before

Dan : just recently i wanted to make sure that their were no moles or anything. So now i can tell you one of our agents went to pose as a investor and joined goldweather to gather information,

Christy : So goldweather is after other versions of me from parallel universes? I don't believe this... I can't believe you believe it. Were talking Scifi nonsense...

Dan : I know it's strange but goldweather pulled it off. they want to kill other versions of you then when they do that, They will go after you.

Christy : What else did you find?

Dan : goldweather has 10 hostages they were people that stumbled on secrets of goldweather that they did not want them to stumble on to, and if by us rescuing them we can learn what they know that will put goldweather out of business for good and all of them behind bars.

Christy : Any idea what the description of the hostages look like?

Dan : he never saw them but he just learned from them that they got 10 hostages they plan to kill them , we got enough info on them to crackdown on goldweather we don't half to get orders from the police department it's our juristition only,

Christy : So finally....

Dan : the final battle will soon begin

Christy : Yes amanda will finally be avenged...

Dan : And about that masked woman who text you I guess we won't learn who she is until after we invade their facility

Christy : When do we start?

Dan : right now. but first

Christy : Yeah?

Dan : i copied vanski's confession and sent it to the police department and the courtroom, but when they went to confront him they found him unconcious at his house... his fingers were slammed shut in one of his windows, he got sent to the hospital to be treated for his wounds,

Christy : he had it coming...

Dan : Maybe but you could've killed him when you broke his fingers. he was hurt real badly. he has 12 broken fingers 6 of them are permantley broken vanski's lawyer is assisting charges get filed against you for it.

Christy : i did what i had to do to get the answers from him and i don't regret it,

Dan : i know you don't.... we'll talk more after we deal with goldweather I'll gather the boys. you're one of my best agents and still are remember that

Christy : Thank you I'll call leonard and let him know

Goldweather Facility

goldweather mercenary thugs are guarding the outside of the facility

marty and a few goldweather mercenary thugs are seen having the masked woman in handcuffs

Marty : Nobody tries to steal my cash from me. and gets away with it, we'll lock her in the room where the other hostages are at. then we'll figure out what to do with her...

Masked Woman : .....

the goldweather mercenary thugs put the masked woman inside the room where they hostages are at,

Marty : Oh baby you were great in bed with me but are a terrible thief...

Dozens of crimes unit agents are are gathering and all are wearing crimes fighter suits.

Dan : Okay listen up team, the fight is taken to goldweathers place of business. now i won't lie some of you might not make it out in one piece. because these mercenaries are trained killers. but please do your best. we got good amounts of ammo and grenades i expect all of them will be resisting so kill any resistance.... christy and jack will lead the way. I will get in position of the back way the others will take the left side which they are at right now, waiting for us to give the order to attack... but right now we got to clear the ones in the parking lot.

Christy : correct were tired of goldweather thinking they own the system here, I saw what they did when i was in tampa it wasn't pretty... but i won't let them do the same thing here.

christy puts a silencer on her gun and has

Jack : anytime commander

Dan : Okay

christy has a handgun attached to her leg and one attached to her other leg. and a knife attached to her pocket.

Dan : Move em out.

christy and jack and a few crimes unit agents are behind them

Christy : On me

christy points her silencer at the 2 goldweather mercenary thugs and fires 2 rounds in their neck with a silencer killing them

Jack : i thought we were only killing resistance.

Christy : They would've signaled for help

Jack : I see 3 of them on the rooftop I'll take a shot

Christy : it has to be with a silencer.

Jack : trust me christy i got one.

Christy : alright let's take them out together 1 2 3

christy and jack fired 3 rounds at the goldweather mercenary thugs killing them which their bodies falls from the rooftop

2 goldweather mercenary thugs comes out of the door and locks it with a key

Christy : 2 more they locked the front door. their mine.

christy shoots 2 rounds into both the goldweather mercenary thugs neck killing them. then she takes the key then as she tries to unlock the door she hears a goldweather mercenary thug guarding the other side of the door.

Jack : Looks like this is where we make noise...

Christy : Yep stand back everyone

christy jack and the few agents step back so christy and toss a grenade at the door and the grenade goes off killing the goldweather mercenary thug guarding it.

alarm sound

Dan : NOW TEAM

all of the crimes unit agents begin to make their move

sound of gunshots

Daryl : DAD THE CRIMES UNIT THEIR ATTACKING OUR FACILITY.

Marty : Get all guards to the fronts kill them KILL THEM NOWWWWW. We can't let them discover our plans if they get tear any evadence that can trace what we been doing... and kill the hostages. daryl you go out there too.

Daryl : But Ballaton is out there

Marty : don't worry i got a few mercenaries who can back you up don't disapoint me son. kill that bitch once and for all. don't let her get the multiverse cube.

goldweather mercenary thugs are seen being shot and killed

goldweather mercenary thug bodys are shown and so are the bodys of miami crimes unit agents.

christy throws a knife at a goldweather mercenary thugs neck killing him instantly

Christy : Has anyone found the hostages yet?

Dan On Speaker : negative not yet

christy sees daryl weston's office then kicks open the door

Daryl : So nice of you to drop by christy...

2 goldweather mercenary thugs point their assault rifles at christy

Goldweather Mercenary Thug 22 : Drop the gun bitch

Daryl : did you really think it would be that easy hahaha...

christy drops her gun

Christy : you're gonna answer for killing my sister.

Daryl : business is buisness christy, why do you even care you fought so hard to come after us only to fail. so you think you can try to put me back to prison again? That's where you're wrong my fathers lawyers can easily get me out. when westons talk money people listen. my mother her name was ella she just didn't except where she came from like me and dad did. back in 1994 she was just leaving an opera concert and a man pointed a gun at her demanding her jewerly and neckless and she corperated with the man but he shot her anyway the man fired 3 rounds in her killing her, my dad heard about it and well he wasn't very sad about it. him and my mom always fought and argued now don't get me wrong, I love my mom but she was very weak and soft. she was a coward she begged that man with the gun to not kill her and he said he wouldn't if she gives him the jewerly and neckless but he lied, and it's her own fault. you know christy goldweather has been in business since the early 90's were that strong and powerful. and have gotten away with it and you think as of now you can stop us. you're wrong theirs no way ken would allow that.

Christy : You and your father are the one that stoled all his shares.

Daryl : But he don't want you to interfere still.

Christy : Maybe

Daryl : Well now that we said all we can said gentlemen kill her.

christy is seen having something in her hand which turns out to be gun powder and it goes off and christy takes cover

sound of shouting and gunshots

then the gun powder stops and the 2 goldweather mercenary are seen just now being killed by christy

daryl stares in horror

Christy : you're through weston so is your father...

daryl starts sobbing

Daryl : Please please no... listen listen I i got money i i got billions of it, You want money right?

christy grabs a katana that belongs to daryl

Daryl : Money money all piles of it I i got it right here...

Christy : You're pathetic. All of your blood money won't get you out of this, YOU KILLED AMANDA GIVE HER BACK YOU SON OF A BITCH

christy stabs daryl in the stomach with the katana killing him

Daryl : *chokes*

christy stares at his body

Christy : Now soak into your blood money.

jack shoots 3 goldweather mercenary thugs killing them

Female Hostage : HEY IS ANYONE THERE.

Male Hostage : HELP US WERE TRAPPED.

Jack : They must be the hostage.

jack brikers gets on his walkie talkie

Jack On Speaker : christy come in. and everyone else.

Christy : Jack it's christy what's up

Jack On Speaker : We found the hostage, come meet us this way.

Christy : You got it. I'm on my way

christy walks out

On Chapter 15

it's the final chapter as the battle with goldweather closes daryl weston has already been killed christy suceeded in avenging her sister amanda's murder but the mysteries the masked woman told her that she will not take will be revealed. and contact with dan norton has been lost along with the other crimes unit agents following him could they been dozens of casualities within the crimes unit to?

mh God "drop trow, and i'll take you to budepest!" Posts: 4,390	Christy Ballaton Apr 21, 2014 19:10:00 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mh on Apr 21, 2014 19:10:00 GMT -6 good stuff jesse! like something from HBO. can't wait to see how it ends

Babu Baboon Administrator Posts: 4,102	Christy Ballaton Apr 22, 2014 8:05:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Babu Baboon on Apr 22, 2014 8:05:51 GMT -6 good stuff!

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Thank you guys now here's the final chapter

Starring Christy Ballaton Rancho (Lead Female Protagonist)
Jack Brikers (Male Protagonist)
Riley Franks
Dan Norton
Leonard Crest
The Masked Woman
Larry Ballaton
Bethany Hines Ballaton
Katrina Smith Brikers
Marty Weston (Main Antagonist)

The goldweather battle concludes on this chapter christy ballaton rushes to jack brikers location of the hostages

Jack : It's this door

Christy : You people listen to me in there, step back we'll gonna satchel charges on the door

Male Hostage 1 : Okay

Jack : where did you get those?

Christy : found them in a locker here

christy sets the satchel charges and they go off on the door taking it out well now 11 hostages are shown one of them the masked woman

Jack : christy look...

Christy : it's her.

Male Hostage 1 : Man think you who are you people you don't look like fbi and cia

Christy : were the miami crimes unit. you're all safe now.

Female Hostage 1 : Thank you they were planning to exacute you us for knowing their secrets.

Christy : So you're the masked woman?

Masked Woman : *female voice disguiser* correct...

Christy : i guess marty had no further use for you since he locked you up in here.

Masked Woman : *female voice disguiser* seems that way,

Jack : I'll give a report to commander norton

jack gets on his walkie talkie

Jack : commander norton come in commander norton we found the hostage and their safe now, commander norton do you copy? commander do you copy?

Christy : you can't reach him?

Jack : No he's not answering.

Christy : and the gunshots out there stopped. come on let's get outside to see what's going on. we'll take you guys to the station and ask you all questions and have you all sent back to your homes.

the masked woman slowly touches a gun of hers then she quickly gets out a flashbang

Masked Woman : I think not

the masked woman shoots one of the hostage in the head killing him

Male Hostage 1 : *grunts*

the masked woman throws out a flashbang

Jack : WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

Christy : LOOK OUT Dammit....

sound of the masked woman shooting the other hostages sound of the hostages screaming

the masked woman shoots 2 hostages in the head at the same time with both guns and shoots 3 other hostages dozens of times in the ribs killing them

then the flashbang effect wears off and christy looks around and sees the hostages have been killed by the masked woman and the masked woman points her gun at christy

Christy : What have you done? We would've had so much on goldweather if you didn't kill them. You're a fucking monster.

Masked Woman : *female voice disguiser* Shut your mouth, Oh you were so easily tricked, whoever thought,

Christy : you being locked up with them was staged?

Masked Woman : *female voice disguiser* correct, we knew you would question the hostages so their was no way we could allow you to put goldweather out of commission for good now with the hostage taken down you're efforts are in vain.

Christy : Who are you?

Masked Woman : *female voice disguiser* I was wondering when you were going to say that. Okay mask off

the masked woman takes off her mask christy gasps at the face while putting her hand over her mouth and shaking her head back and fourth because she can't believe who it is

Christy : No that's impossible..... Amanda?

Amanda : That's right sis,

Christy : You're the masked woman? but we had the ceremony

Amanda : Yeah i know we watched what was in there was just a dummy we created,

Christy : Amanda.... Why did you kill these people? They did nothing to you why are you acting this way

Amanda : if you're wondering how you thought i got shot by goldweather thugs well no they did not ever shoot me, see it was all staged when they ambushed me while inside one of their vehicles a goldweather mercenary did shot the rooftop of the vehicle to make it look like i been shot, and they used the blood of a cow to make it look like human blood....

the young female hostage turns out to still be okay and she's the other hostage to not have been killed by amanda so she quickly peeps her head out at amanda while shaking since she's terrified of amanda since she killed the other hostage but amanda sees the last remaining hostage peeping at her so amanda quickly turns her head towards the young female hostage and shoots her in the head killing her

Christy : But what what does this all mean? You you're you're You're working with goldweather... They they must've brainwashed you or something

Marty : brainwashed her? How amusing....

marty walks towards amanda

Amanda : Hi baby

amanda and marty start smooching on the lips

Jack : Huh?

Christy : AMANDA STOP YOU'RE MARRIED.

Marty : still can't believe it can you ballaton? you're sister amanda has been working for goldweather for 9 years,

Christy : What?

christy falls to her knees in disbelief about her sister being a mercenary thug for goldweather

Amanda : Goldweather recruited me in 2006 I've been in training since then for this moment to get revenge against you, that's right i been training in combat for 9 years for this moment to get revenge against you, it was a long training but worth it to finally reveal to you my true colors, sis you were always so good in melee combat and now i know you're tactics and i can easily match your melee style.... marty told me it would be the only way to beat you and now finally i get to use it on you.

amanda has her left arm around marty's waist

Amanda : thanks to this man he has given me the power to finally beat you. right baby?

Marty : you know it sugar

marty and amanda smooch

Amanda : leave my sister to me baby, it's a personal matter,

Marty : Well okay.... Hey by the way you were good in bed let's try it again.

amanda blows a kiss at marty

Amanda : for you baby that will be a pleasure.

Marty : Now if you'll excuse me gentlemen I got to take care of business and see if the bloodstains in the parking lot of crime unit agents can be cleaned.

marty walks off

Amanda : Now christy you're finally mine.

Christy : I won't fight you amanda...

Amanda : you don't got much of a choice, see i know you think of me as a misguided villain but you wanna know what? it's you who is the villain... not everyone including me has forgotten the female you use to be that female who breaks the law and gets away with it,

Jack : christy is a changed woman the past is the past but you're hurting her so badly, and you're married how could you do this to your husband and kids? to cheat on them for somebody who is old enough to be your father?

Amanda : You know what you annoy me so I'm shutting you up

amanda points her gun at jack

Christy : AMANDA DON'T

amanda shoots jack brikers 2 times

Jack : *grunt* *grunt*

christy puts her hands over her mouth and stares upset that jack brikers is down

Amanda : Now it's just you and me. don't worry about your partner christy because you will join him soon. including your commander. Yep that's right he was killed too. the mercenaries took care of him completly. remember when you came back to tampa? You were very sickly and not to mention you were losing weight constantly and were in the hospital from it and they found you had celiac disease so after that you started to eat nothing but organic food and organic junk food but it was a shame that you had to find out what celiac disease because i was counting on it to kill you but it didn't

Christy : How could you say something like that to me? i would never do the same thing you because i care about you.

Amanda : Bullshit... you've broken the law so much in the past and hurt mom and yet mom forgave you 2 times and that wasn't right, you've disgraced the ballaton name so much. you think goldweather are a bunch of criminals? think again we want to crackdown on people that preys on society and those people are anon edward snowden you especially and others, you think you're all above the law but you are not, but enough about them my goal is you getting revenge at you for all those times you've hurt mom she think's she's done the right thing to forgive you but she hasn't you only made her think that....

Daryl Weston's Office

Marty : Daryl what's taking you so long we *gets interupted when he sees the mercenary thugs body and his son daryl's body

marty hugs daryl's body without crying then he stares in a pissed off raging way

Marty : BALLATONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

marty's mobile phone rings

Marty : WHAT

Goldweather Mercenary Thug 31 On Speaker : Sir the chopper is on it's way... we got to flee

Marty : Okay... I'm rigging this facility to take out ballaton.

Goldweather Mercenary Thug 31 On Speaker : but what about amanda?

Marty : she will get out, I know her well i trained her after all. we did a test training involving something like this before and she got out okay... she wants to have it out with her sister so she needs to do that.

marty gets off his mobile phone and rigs the facility

sound of beeping

marty runs out

Female Computer Voice : all personal evacuate this is no drill.

Christy : Huh?

Amanda : So marty has started... Well now christy you will fight me now.

Christy : AMANDA THIS IS NONSENSE

amanda puts her hand around jack's neck threatning to snap it.

Amanda : fight me or you're partner will have a crunch sound coming from his neck

christy tosses her gun away and amanda tosses hers away.

Christy : I guess. we got no choice.

Amanda : Now you're talking

christy and amanda run at each other.

sound of punching

amanda and christy block each others fist and amanda does a backflip and punches christy

Christy : *grunt*

christy's lip is bleeding

amanda tries to kick christy but christy catches her leg and causes her to lose her balance then amanda gets back up and tries to punch christy again but christy dodges and does a uppercut punch on her which doesn't make amanda grunt but it makes her lip bleed too amanda wipes the blood from her lip and smiles

Amanda : Very good. But I'm JUST GETTING WARMED UP

amanda does a jump kick on christy but it doesn't knock her to the floor and christy dodges her move.

sound of miami crimes unit vehicles showing up and marty sees them

the goldweather mercenary thugs give marty a bazooka and marty uses it on the miami crimes unit killing the agents inside it.

the bodys of miami crimes unit agents are seen in the parking lot so are the bodys of the goldweather mercenary thugs so it's a blood bath at the parking lot of the facility

christy and amanda are still fighting.

Amanda : so what if you land some punches on me, it just makes it more of a good challenge. and besides I can see you're looking very exhausted now.

Christy : Amanda............

amanda does a karate chop attack on christy's lower ear

Christy : *screams*

christy falls to the floor defenseless

Female Computer Voice : 5 minutes and counting

Amanda : Face it sis.... you lost... you're finally beaten as payback for all your crimes my strength is more superior then yours now. you have been beaten by your own strength. as i used it against you.

Christy : *groans* amanda whatever kind of wrongful thing i have done to made you so angry at me with so much hate in you i am very sorry...

amanda aims her fist at christy

Christy : if you feel to the need to do this then okay

amanda punches christy in the face more then once.

Christy : okay amanda *grunts* don't forget you're big sister loves you... *grunts* you get it all outta your system you're hurt i know

Amanda : WHAT DO YOU CARE?

Christy : *grunts* I do care

amanda then stops punching her sister christy

Female Computer Voice : 3 minutes and counting

Amanda : alright that's the queue and don't worry I'll make sure your paycheck goes to jerry jr and james jr and lila and the rest

amanda walks off leaving christy to be killed

jack brikers is seen moving and groaning so he's still okay

jack looks at christy

Jack : Christy... CHRISTY.

Female Computer Voice : 2 minutes and counting

Jack : Oh that don't sound good.

Christy : *weak voice* amanda.

Jack : Christy hang in there I'll get you out.

amanda is seen running out to the parking lot and sees marty on the rooftop waiting for the chopper which is heard in the distance but then amanda flashsback to when her and christy were little kids and they were playing together and amanda fail and hurt her knee christy was doctoring it.

Amanda : *sigh* looks like it's a sister rescue

amanda runs back inside.

Female Computer Voice : 90 seconds and counting

jack is seen carrying a unconcious christy in his arms but he falls to the floor because of his gunshot wound

Jack : *grunts* *moans* Dammit

Amanda : leave her to me.

Jack : What? you're saving her?

Amanda : Just shut up and go

amanda helps up christy and walks off quick so does jack who is still trying to recover from his wounds

amanda gets into the parking lot entrance to the facility and puts christy ballaton on the grass part and jack sits on the grass by her.

Amanda : I was so sure my gunshot would've killed you but had a feeling it wouldn't

Jack : bullet proof vest.

Amanda : Figures..... she will need a doctor but she will be okay

Jack : thanks

Amanda : Don't thank me this don't change anything.

amanda walks off and climbs on the ladder as the chopper shows up

Marty : It's about time

Amanda : let's just get outta here.

marty and amanda gets inside the chopper that a few goldweather mercenary thugs are inside of and it takes off but then christy wakes up from being unconcious and she looks around and sees jack

Christy : I thought you were done for.... Amanda she?

Jack : she got you outta there, but she's escaping in that chopper with marty.

christy sees the chopper

Christy : give me your silencer

Jack : huh?

Christy : Just give it to me

jack gives christy the silencer which she hides under her shoulder as the chopper comes by

Marty : I didn't think you would be left in there, but still you are beaten ballaton, and with the hostage gone goldweather still continues

christy takes out the silencer and shoots 2 rounds into marty weston's chest killing him instantly

Marty : *grunt* *grunt*

blood comes out of marty weston's gunshot wound then his body falls out of the chopper

Goldweather Mercenary Thug Pilot : DAMMIT TURN AROUND SHE JUST KILLED MARTY.

Amanda : No just leave her alone, we got all the shares back to donald anyway...

Goldweather Mercenary Thug Pilot : I suppose you're right.

the chopper flies off

christy goes unconcious

the story goes into audio

paramedics put christy into the back of the ambulence and jack brikers gets his gunshot wounds checked by 2 other paramedics and commander dan norton's body is seen and they zip his body in a body bag

officer lyle vanski is seen being escorted to a prison cell where he looks angry also left over members of the miami crimes unit walks towards riley franks and they handcuff him

South Miami Hospital

christy is in a hospital gown and jerry jr and james jr hug her and so does lila.

A Few weeks later

christy and jack and katrina were watching jacks 2 kids alex and sam are playing baseball in their yard along with jack's 2 kids friends

Christy : Good job alex good job...

Katrina : well guys you hungry got some hot dogs

Sam : YEAH I'm starving

jack walks up towards christy

Jack : how are you holding up?

Christy : Well confused. can't explain all the things my sister did to get back at me. but she did came back for me,

Jack : So you plan to find amanda?

Christy : Yes... besides i don't think we seen the last of her anyway, but i'm going on this trip solo i can't involve you or anyone else in miami. just family.

Jack : I understand....

Christy : we lost alot of agents... goldweather lost alot of mercenaries too. so the numbers were tied

Jack : Your sister gave you a good beat down.

Christy : She did indeed... i guess she learned how i could fight so good that she went for a long time in training to be just as good as me in melee combat.. since 2006 she trained to be just as good as me that is a long time, jerry think's any person can overpower me quickly just because she did, but i told him no and not to worry.

Jack : so what was officer vanski's sentence?

Christy : sadly it isn't a 25 year prison sentence but good news is it's not a 3 year prison sentence. the only thing they could do was a 5 year prison sentence.... and as for riley franks. same thing,and the us goverment has seized goldweather's operations in the United states for good so goldweather is now back at operating overseas again in other words back to their roots. i guess goldweather won... i mean if those hostages hadn't been killed goldweather would've done anywhere for good. i told mom dad my brother james and everyone in the family about what's been going on their all loss at words i think my mom is more at not taking the news about it more though. and as the multiverse cube the city think's i should keep it for now.

Jack : looks like you got another quest coming up then...

Christy : Yeah it looks like it.

Jack : Hows jerry?

Christy : he's asleep at the mansion He's been giving a break from the national guard and he's been real worried about what went on. he's a great guy he's always been.... Well you go enjoy your free time with your sons I'll watch with katrina.

Jack : You got it.

christy recieves a text from the goldweather founder donald kercial christy checks it and the text message subject reads

SUBJECT : ENOUGH

and the text message reads we haven't met before... but you and your fellow crew have caused me alot of trouble and so i would like to thank you for killing marty weston and his son because of you doing that i got all of my shares back, you killing them was not a win for you but a win for me. seeing that all my shares are now back with me yes goldweather is finished in the US for good but now we will continue overseas...... And your sister by my side as my partner so you can have miami i got all my shares back so no need to continue operations in the US anyway... So Next time DON'T FUCK WITH ME!!!!

Christy : And you stay outta my way when i find my sister.

the multiverse cube is inside christy's purse and it glows for a little bit

Coming Soon Christy Ballaton Episode II : The Next Arc (and jerry rancho returns on this christy ballaton revival sequel)
A Jerry Rancho Spin-off
Christy Ballaton Episode III : Christy Ballaton Origins

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Now that The Masked Woman is revealed to be christy's sister here's a look at the antagonist titles

Amanda Ballaton (Main Antagonist)
Marty Weston (Secondary Antagonist)

Last Edit: Apr 23, 2014 10:25:00 GMT -6 by blackvault

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